Ponyville is visited by a mysterious mare that seems to have lost all happiness in her life, but there's more to her than what's on the outside. She has forgotten who she is and goes by the alias of Silent Fear. The Mane 6 takes it upon themselves to discover the truth about her.
Fears are unleashed and tears are shed as Silent Fear's memories are rediscovered.
A (kinda) crossover with Silent Hill
Well, this is promising.
Creepy.
I will read eventually
Not a bad premise, but writing seems kinda stilty.
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I'm not the most experienced writer. I may do an edit when that time comes.
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Thank you. In the meantime I will fav this story. I see a good bit of potential in you, but I hope that you won't be discouraged or intimidated.
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Thanks, and don't worry. I am well aware of my inexperience.
One last thing, sorry. But I can imagine some curiosity directed towards your character due to the fact that she is an alicorn.
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She is actually a Pegasus
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Sorry to argue, but both the picture of the story and the story itself say she is an alicorn.
Or is that horn a result of her inner magic/curse?
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It's a "curse horn" it grew out after she was cursed.
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Ah, thank you for verifying. I appreciate it.
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Here's her "pre-curse" form:
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Ooh! I like her. ^^ And thanks again for everything.
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You're welcome
Silent Hill crossovers are awesome.
Wonder whats planned with Spike in this?