Cyborg Dragon: Origin Story

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #1 · Jan 23rd, 2021 · · ·

"Spike, get into the underground bunker, and DO NOT come out unless I say so." Twilight said as she placed the little drake into the underground bunker using her magic, but Spike was nearly smashed onto the ground due to Twilight's overpowered magic, which were unstable.

She didn't apologize for that?!

"No buts! Go!" She then shut the underground bunker's doors and locked it, she then whispered softly, "Spike, if I don't make it back, take care of yourself..." Then she looked to the direction of Tirek and walked towards it with determination of death .

This doesn't sound right!

Tirek was defeated, and peace was restored once again. But not everything is being restored, the pain of losing her son is way too far. Spike's funeral is held at his birth place, Canterlot. However, that day was a sunny day, which madd it hard to morn. Twilight blamed herself, blamed Faust for the disrespect, but this own't help receiving Spike... He is gone...

*Made*.

Also, Twilight SHOULDN'T blame/curse Faust herself. Also, WHAT "Disrespect" did you blame Faust for. That sounds Stupid to say that. Also, What if Faust is the one that save Spike's life by teleporting him to the Overwatch Universe, Stupid!!!!

But Princess Celestia, knew something isn't right, she lived a long life, she saw too much deaths, but sh halos encountered many unnatural events. And Spike's death isn't as easy as she thought, plus they couldn't find even a small piece of his corpse, its like... He vanished into the thin air.

*She has*

Genji Shimada never really thought about his life, at least not until that incident involving his broth nearly killing him. He remembered that sorrow look in Hanzo's eyes before he left him in the ruins of fire. Why?

*Brother*

No time to wonder how the hell is a mythical being doing here, Genji frowned when he saw teh dragon's condition. It reminded him of... Himself on that night, when his brother struck him down. This dragon's badly burned, his legs and left arm were missing, his left eye is badly damaged, most likely blinded, and he's bleeding out.

*The*

"I managed to stop the bleeding, but h lost half of his organs, h was hit directly by something with high temperature, his scales were able to resist some of the heat. Aside form the strange appearance, his internal organs and body structure is a bit similar to a human's. But he won't live long like this; remember the day we found you?" Angela said while looking at Genji straight in the eyes, gaining a nod form the cyborg ninja.

*He*

Seriously, how can you miss that?! No offense.

Now almost every agents had heard about this dragon that Genji found, though some of them were curious, they knew better than setting off Angela. Tracer always came around the medical bay after training or during her break time to visit the unique patient, she stated that this dragon looked a bit like the western dragons, unlike the Shimada dragons. To their surprise, when Hanzo came in, he stated that he sensed great dragon spirit coming from the small dragon.
"Me and Genji's dragon spirit isn't as strong as this one," Hanzo said, "if we're at a 70 percent of dragon spirit, then this little one here is nearly 98.5 percent."
"You mean, this one can use the same dragon power as the Shimada?" Angela asked.
"Yes, but it's far more than just controlling the dragon," Hanzo said with a serious expression, "If this little dragon can use up to 98 percent of his power, then he could destroy the planet or teh world itself."
The room got quiet afterwards.

*The*

Also, WTF!!!???? HOW is he stronger than even Genji or Hanzo's Dragon Powers? And the Power to destroy the World/Planet??!! I call that BS! He is No Dragon Ball or Naruto Character??!! If Spike somehow has this Power? Why didn't he kick Tirek's Butt??!! Did he have this power before or after he is a Cyborg?

"It's the only way for him not to be used by Talons or destroying mankind." Genji said, suddenly, thy heard groans coming from the surgery table, they give each other glances before going to greet this unique little creature.

I highly doubt Spike will be that Frickin Evil to do that on the latter.

A lot of events went by in this year, Starlight Glimmer and Sunset Shimmer's reformation, Storm King's invasion, and the opening of School of Friendship. Twilight is now the Princess of Equestria, however, she wasn't as all happy about this. Only if Spike could see this as well...
Tears rolled down her cheeks as the memories rushed into her head, Spike's horrible death, the pain... She tried hard to resist the urge of braking down.
"Princess?" A voice asked, Twilight looked up, seeing the worried face of her student, Luster Dawn, "Is everything alright?"

Their is a slight error her in the Timeline. I agree that the events from Season 5-7, Movie, and Season 8 is alright.

BUT, After Season 9, and BEYOND that with Twilight looking like Celestia, have Luster Dawn as her new student, and her Friends getting Older. It's takes MORE than a single Year for all of that to happened!

Plus, Without Spike in the later Seasons. WHO can help Twilight with Sunset, The Dazzlings, and Starlight in the Time Loop. Or even help Ember or Thorax become Leaders. No Offense! But, I don't think you thought this though with a Season 5-9 Timeline without Spike involved.

It cannot be... Twilight shook off the thought as she stood tall and faced the creature, "SHOW YOURSELF THIS INSTANT!" she shouted in her Royal Canterlot voice. The red eyes stared at her, then the rest of the body began to glow with strange red dots, then it hopped down from the ceiling in front of Twilight without a single sound. Twilight was taken back and surprised by the graceful landing and the fact that it's soundless.
"Who are you?" Twilight asked carefully at the strange creature, when she looked closely, her eyes widened in shock. This creature is half-robotic, his entire bodies covered in a strange-looking suit she'd never seen before. (Looked kinda like Genji's)
The creature did not answer her. Twilight's shock is replaced by anger, this creature is disrespecting her in front of her student. Her horn charged with magic as she snarled at the creature, "Whoever you are, you better get off, o else-"
"Or else what, Princess?"The creature snarked, his voice sounded familiar, while it mixed with robotic voice. (Sounds like Genji's voice) "Why are you upset? Is it because of Spike? You blame yourself, for his death."
Twilight's eyes turned to rage, "YOU DON'T DESERVE TO SAY HIS NAME!" Then she charged her magic, this magic, however, is unique, it was bonded with her by Celestia with Spike. Her eyes glowed as she spoke the enchanted words. Then fired the spell, a purple energy beam with a Alicorn Spirit formed in the beam as it charged at the creature.
"Seresutiaruu~ittinmī! Watashi no teki o hakai seyo!" (Yes, it is made up by myself, meaning: Celestial WIthin Me! Destroy My Enemy!)
The creature did not flinch of show any fear, instead, he grabbed the Katana behind his back and pulled it out while shouting words that SHOCKED Twilight.
"Watashi no naka no doragon no tasogare! Teki o totsugeki seyo!" (Meaning: twilight of dragon within me! Charge my enemy!)
The energy beam shot from the katana formed a raging dragon spirit as it charged at the Alicorn Spirit, it destroyed the Alicorn spirit completely as it charged towards Twilight. The Princess's eyes widened in shock, surprise, and horror. But before the rating dragon spirit could Destry her as well, the mysterious figure suddenly seized his attack, the spirit disappeared.
Twilight's eyes were still in shock, as her friends and students stormed into *THE* castle, must've heard the noises coming from it earlier.
"Twilight! Who's this dude?!" Rainbow Dash snarled, "YOU ARE IN BIG TROUBLE-" She was cut off by a ninja star flying straight at her, it changed course and sliced off few of her manes before returning to the creature's right claw, it suddenly disappeared into the robotic claw. The rest of them show in fear at the deadly creature, but it showed no sign of killing any of them.
"Only Spike, could use that Dragon spirit, bonded by Celestia... Who are you..." Twilight was loss for words, she managed to mutter out those above.
The creature suddenly disappeared in a blur of red flash that even outran Rainbow Dash, Twilight barely have time to react before a blade was set in front of her neck, barely cutting her. The creature was right next to her, he DASHED. Nopony/creature moved as Twilight was been held hostage.
"Do it then, KILL me." Twilight said with her eyes closed, she'd be joining Spike anyway. But to her surprise, the assassin creature set off his blade, and placed the blade into the holster hanging behind his thigh.

"No, I will not grant you the death you wished *FOR*, you have your friends, students, and... Your son." The creature said. The last two words made Twilight's eyes shot open as she quickly got up and stared at the creature.
"No! My son... Is dead..." she said.
The creature looked at her, then placed his claws behind his mask, a light click was heard as the mask was unlocked, hisses of air shooting out from the breathing vines of the mask, Twilight and the others' eyes winded more, as the creature unmasked himself.
The others gasped as twilight's eyes widened in shock as she covered her muzzle with her hooves. The assassin, his face, has a scar ran across his left eye, right eye was blind, replaced by a robotic red eye. And his right cheek has a burned mark on it. His only natural eye, was emerald.
He smiled, "Hello mother."
"S...Spike..." Twilight muttered, "Is it..."

This part. Has so many wrong here. Despite having some misspelling that shouldn't be their in the first place. How can you misspell *The, He, For*, and other Simple Words?

But for one, WHY is Cyborg Spike being a Ass to Twilight, and her Friends?! I know he is acting like Genji to Hanzo in the Overwatch Short. But, the problem is, Spike is NOT like Genji! Sure, Genji is his master. But, don't be a carbon copy of him. And instead of TELLING/SHOWING Twilight his True self. He acted like a total Dick, and provoke her to attack him??!!

It makes TOTAL Sense for the Ninja Brother Rivals. But, Why would a Kid/Teen like Spike Provoke his Mom ( Twilight) to attack him, and nearly kill her??!! That was Totally Unnecessary for Everyone over here.

He could have showed his face, the MOMENT he showed up. Then, we don't have the Unnecessary fighting. And another thing:

"Yes, mom, I'm back." Spike answered, but his smile froze as Twilight gave him a raging glare, he was tackled onto the ground with Twilight on him.
"WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?!" Twilight shouted with *HER* royal canterlot voice, "YOU BETTER HAVE A GOOD BUCKING EXPLANATION OR ELSE!" Then her angry looked faded as tears rolled down, she broke down as she sobbed in Spike's arms.
"Twilight, you're filled with sorrow and pain, you blamed yourself *FOR* my death didn't you?" Spike asked quietly, Twilight's eyes widened more.
"How-"you
"Let's just say... I have some unique teachers." Spike said, breaking the embrace, "But know that I never blamed you for my 'death', you did your best, I did what I have to do. You *HAVE NO* right to blame yourself or drowning yourself in shame and sorrow."

This is bad as well. And this is Twilight's attitude this time. Why the heck is she demand, and even threatening Spike to "Explain Himself"? And what is with " Or Else"? Or else, WHAT? Bitch!!! Spike is Powerful enough to kick your weak ass. So, DON'T talk back to him! 😡

And STOP using the God Damn "Royal Canterlot Voice" already. Do you want to BREAK Spike's Robotic and sensitive ears, and make him Deaf? Don't you have a "Inside Voice"? Geez, you are acting like Luna!!!

Your NOT acting like a very good mother for treating Spike like that. And once Spike reveal himself. You DIDN'T apologize for trying to attack him. And just Yelled at him??!!

And Considering that you also insult Faust. Do you want Faust to take Spike back to Overwatch. Because your just a Angry, Violent, Ungrateful, Child Abusing Bitch?

Twilight

Me: I don't think so! 😈

And STOP blaming yourself for Spike's "Death". It is Tirek's ( And technically Discord's Fault for helping Tirek) Fault to begin with. And why isn't he executed for "murdering" Spike for Justice?

"Weird names." Applejack couldn't help but blurted out.

Hypocrite!!! Considering the fact that your name is a Cereal Box!

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