This story is a sequel to Negotiations
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It's a tale as old as time itself.
A wonderful individual of many faces, a handful of adventurous companions, and a seemingly inconspicuous blue police box.
This time, the Doctor finds himself in a dimension not his own, in familiar lands more alien than the planet he appeared on. Dropped smack dab in the middle of the Conversion War, it's up to him and his new friends to put a end to Celestia's mad ambitions before they can be realized. But the Doctor is no stranger to conflict, and Equestria will learn exactly why he is known as the Oncoming Storm...
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*An Alternate Universe story and crossover with Doctor Who for the Negotations-Verse series. Originally posted in Choice, it was decided to make it its own story after suggestions from readers as well as discussions between me and zelkova48.
Please help out at the Negotations-Verse TV Tropes Page: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/TheNegotiationsVerse
Ooh, I like this!
Hope to see this catch up and continue the story soon!
Im in to put an end to the war✊
Just one chapter? I assume there's more after all those eight parts.
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Yup. I'll be writing the other parts as time goes on. I'm just updating this slowly week by week so new people can catch up to it.
I hope there's new chapters coming out with this change.
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There will be yes
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Muy Guay.
I find it ironic that the story itself regenerated
Did you rewrite the stories? Or are they the same?
Huh, I thought you would've posted the eight chapters here and gone from there. But this is cool. Another instant fav and track.
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They are the same
Well, ackchyually, a tidally-locked planet would have a comfortable zone right in between the bright and the dark side. Yes. The Twilight Zone.
(I really am not trying to be that guy, I enjoy your stories and have read most of the Negotiations-verse... but I had to let that out. I'm probably the 7, 368, 934th person to mention that, right?)
both.
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Not really the heat differences would cause massive winds it would be possible to survive but there would have been no warning except the sun stopping moving
by the time people realised what had happened, that it couldnt be fixed and what needed to be done. There would have been no time to gather supplies and travel to the safe zone.
oh god....
They are also after royalty and children
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We will take down the princesses and end the war.
It’s back, what dragged me into MLP has come back.
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It wouldn't be immediate. Yes, eventually there would be disasters as a result of the change, but residual heat and inertia (in case Equestria/Equus rotates) would keep things going for a little while. Case in point: The extended nights seen in the pilot episode and the possible future in Cutie Re-Mark where Nightmare Moon won .
For anyone who already read the story on Choice, I'm pretty sure there's an Internet Archive link for the original chapters that you can read until all the chapters come out here.
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its been more then two years since equestria moved dimentions there wont be many left and time has been altered so much that the people that the doctor so loved have been erased from time.
Its the loss of the future that hurts the most for the doctor
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I hear you. That makes a difference.
Is that the last time we see Discord?
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No
I'm rather hoping for Celestia to he mind-controlled, you know? Manipulated, somehow.
Don't want this to be on her.
When Discord is absolutely terrified, you run far, far, FAR AWAY, or alternatively just end it… Before things go even worse than worse…
Celestia, for your own damn sake, and possibly most of the ponies sake. You listen to Discord to heart, f****** surrender immediately, get rid of that stupid shield, reverse the changed humans back to normal, AND stand on trial for crimes against humanity. And hope you have a "very good" apology by now.
Otherwise, you're obviously gonna frickin regret it, and wished that you should have listen to Discord. Because the Doctor is a borderline badass powerhouse that you shouldn't f*** over!
Sooo......
He is powerful like a god?
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Who? Discord?
Loving all the classic series references in the story, and having 13 been a hippogriff is pretty spot on. :)
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No
Doctor
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No he's not a god
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He's what gods fear.
Death.
Noticed the Gen 5 tag, don't recall any references to it in the original.
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In the original The Doctor was friends with them. I believe it was the first chapter.
Though I have read this once before, it is still a wonderful read. Thank you for taking the time to make this amazing story.
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The Doctor was traveling with the G5 crew as his companions before he went to check something out in the G4 timeline when he got caught up in the transportation to the alternate universe which lead to his regeneration
Celestia, you goddamn Delusional Idiot!
You will LOSE against the Doctor, and you will regret it big time.
As for Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Luna, Cadence, Shining Armor, and even Bon Bon. You are all STUPID too.
And I'm just disappointed with Spike, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity.
At least Fluttershy has common sense, and balls of steel to do what she is doing with Discord. She, Discord, Lyra, and especially the Doctor are the real heroes!
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OH MY GOSH
Everyone is soo stupid!!
They are a lost cause
what happened to the Twilight we knew in love!!?
The Twilight who showed friebdship! Who tried defending Zecora for being different, Who stopped Tirek by sacrificing her magic for her friends, who gave Discord a chance when nopony else will.
WHO BELIEVED that everypony and non-ponies deserve to be treated with Kindness, Loyalty, Honesty, Generosity and Laughter!
The one who believed in the magic of friendship!?
Reading this gives me a sense of deja vu all over again.
The Princesses are foals to get on the bad side of the Doctor.
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Blind devotion to Celestia. In her eyes, her mentor Celestia is always right. If Celestia believes that humans cannot be saved and must either be converted or killed to save them from themselves, then who is she to question the wise and benevolent ruler who helped her become the pony she is today?
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Ahh, I had already read this a while ago in Choices so I didn't reread it or remember. Thanks.
The Doctor meets the UNForces. Since they fight an interuniversal threat, maybe, the UN should create a United Nations Interuniversal Taskforce (U. N. I. T.). Colonel Alistair Gordon Lethbridge-Stewart, about to be promoted to Brigadier General, is perfect to lead it.
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But it obviously goes against everything she's been taught of friendship.
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That does pretty much sum up the G4 pponies. Very stupid, very naive, and very bigoted. Why seeing them get slapped down and beaten until the blinders finally come off is so cathartic.