When her brother brings his wife and child over, Twilight seems to have a breakdown. After a panic attack, Twilight decides to try and leave Ponyville to start a new life, one that will include Flurry Heart.
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I love this premise. And actual drama!
Very good beginning.
So how does kidnapping Flurry Heart make any kind of sense? Twilight is family, so that does help. But even Twilight's delusions make more sense than that.
And she's fooling herself if she thinks everypony will let her get away with this. Equestria isn't that stupid that one pony won't recongize her.
I like this. Your writing much more immersive. Evocative, too. Good on you!
I do wonder what kind of bad decision Twilight made that caused her to run away?
I do wonder who that mysterious stallion was and will he show up again in later chapters?
I see what you did there. Star and Scream, hello Starscream.
Aw, we didn’t get to meet this version of Mabel. Otherwise, nice reference.
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You mean the Brown one right? If so, he’s like a reference to Dipper pines. In universe, I have no idea. We’ll have to wait and see.
Okay. This just screams Twilight is being fucked with by someone. In-universe. None of this feels right. Luna comes to mind. But I can't see why she would do this.
Discord is nowhere near this smart. So I'm stuck.
Called it. Someone is fucking with Twilight. None of this is real. Just a dream.
Damn you Luna.
Answers that. Twilight is being fucked with, and she's too bucking stupid to realize it. Nothing new there.
One little thing: whenever you use "mourning" in this chapter, it should be "morning".
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I would have to agree. They keep changing how long Twilight has been out.
Update!
I was afraid I would not see them anymore! I want to know what is happening.