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"Show my head to the people, it is worth seeing." - Georges Danton

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Rainbow Dash doesn't really like space assassins. She especially doesn't like when they're trying to kill her.

Hopefully, her new AI gets her out of this mess.


Cover Art by MusicFireWind who was incredibly kind to let me use this piece. Many thanks to her for that! Piece in question can be found here.

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“Were the pews really necessary?” TWI asked.

I'm sorry, but is that heresy that I'm detecting?

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HOW DARE SHE IMPLY PEW PEWS ARE UNIMPORTANT!

No explosion, no matter how cool, made sound in space

Not technically true, it's just that the sound can only travel as far as the explosion produces a dense enough gas cloud to carry the sound. Right next to a large explosion would be very loud, a few dozen meters very quiet, and after maybe 100 or so meters it would probably be nearly undetectable

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And even then, sound can still travel through space, because even space isn't quite a perfect vacuum--it'll just be so faint it'll be beyond the human range of hearing.

But in space, your dog could hear you scream. Or so science has determined.

Love this one, its getting added to my faves top 10.

This was a pretty fun story. I see you have a thing for women in space with their sassy AIs. You did a good job keeping the personalities recognizably pony.

Rainbow nodded. “Just don’t get too crazy.”
“And try and show you up?” TWI snickered. “I wouldn’t dream of it.”

:rainbowdetermined2:: "Good. because that's my job!"

Hopefully that wouldn’t be an issue for someone else a couple centuries down the road.

I know that is a reference for something, but I can't place it...

“Were the pews really necessary?” TWI asked.
Rainbow nodded. “How can you have a cool space battle if you can’t even have awesome sound effects?”

Can't argue with that.


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

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