Oof. I'll echo what Xanderfox said. You're assuming everyone that reads this will have a deep know how of Gundam. That's a horrible way to go about a story.
Not everyone on this site has watched the franchise. Even those who have might not have seen that particular series if you're focusing on one in general.
You don't need to explain literally everything. But if people are constantly asking what the hay you're talking about, then the story is in trouble.
I also question why Spike is the main character? He's not the worse choice, but still.
Feels like the middle of a longer story and that a deep knowlage of Gundam is nessicary as descriptions are sparse and lack detail.
Oof. I'll echo what Xanderfox said. You're assuming everyone that reads this will have a deep know how of Gundam. That's a horrible way to go about a story.
Not everyone on this site has watched the franchise. Even those who have might not have seen that particular series if you're focusing on one in general.
You don't need to explain literally everything. But if people are constantly asking what the hay you're talking about, then the story is in trouble.
I also question why Spike is the main character? He's not the worse choice, but still.
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I did the lack of description was intentional on my part, I well go into deeper description of the gundam in later chapter.
And as for Spike as the main character, why not?
Hm, interesting start.
Can't wait to see what else you have in mind for the story, best of luck.
hey echo482 do you have fanart of the story?
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I do not, my drawing suck but I work in CGI so it will take me some time to get it out.
If you need OCs for the students of the other schools, pm me.
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You can try commissioning a cover.
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Spike is my favourite character i support you on that.