The Loneliest Holiday

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Wallflower Blush wishes she wasn’t alone on Hearth’s Warming.

This was written for TCC56 as a part of Jinglemas 2020! For more information about Jinglemas, checkout our group!

TCC56's requested characters were: Wallflower Blush

Prereaders: The Red Parade, Flutterpriest

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1 · 24th Dec 2020 · 658 words
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Chapter 2 · 24th Dec 2020 · 2,324 words
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Chapter 3 · 24th Dec 2020 · 321 words
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The Sleepless Beholder

The Sleepless Beholder #1 · Dec 24th, 2020 · 2 · · Chapter 3 ·

This was really Heartwarming and relatable for me. From the wanting to speak about anything with anyone, to the disregard for selfcare, and the feeling of a family that doesn't really care about you unless you call their attention. I also think the choice of Applejack was perfect for this kind of story.

Very good job, I want to see what else you can come up with in the future.

Mica

Mica #2 · Dec 24th, 2020 · 5 · · Chapter 2 ·

her sneakers and went out into the snow

Oh, silly Wally, you don't wear sneakers into a blizzard unless you want frozen feet!

"No. But we have a video call every holiday, so that's kinda like them being here."

Wow, this line is loaded. You can almost hear the disappointment in Wally's voice when she says this.

TCC56

TCC56 #3 · Dec 24th, 2020 · 7 · · Chapter 1 ·

Damn but if this chapter ain't A Mood.

TCC56

TCC56 #4 · Dec 24th, 2020 · 5 · · Chapter 3 ·

This story's got a lot of 2020 vibes to it - the isolation, the withdrawing, the loss of awareness of time. It's a very Wallflower year.

You've done an excellent job here. The core story itself is good and sweet and particularly meaningful in a year like this, but most of all? All the little bits and pieces are there. The details that elevate a story, like Wallflower reflexively going for the stone or Applejack botching her own extraction by pulling too hard.

I love it. Thank you.

Charlie_K

Charlie_K #5 · Dec 24th, 2020 · 3 · · Chapter 3 ·

A very touching story. Very appropriate and all.

Wallflower might have to be careful with what information she shares during this emotional high she's on, however. If Granny Smith hears too much about her home life, she might just find herself invited to stay over for a lot longer.

Fillyfoolish

Fillyfoolish #6 · Dec 25th, 2020 · 3 · · Chapter 3 ·

It is a truth universally acknowledged that unless an Equestria Girl is ace, she is crushing on Sunset Shimmer.

Good work, and echoing this is timely :(

Gay For Gadot

Gay For Gadot #7 · Dec 26th, 2020 · 3 · · Chapter 3 ·

This was adorable! I love all the little details you included throughout, especially Wallflower reaching for the stone out of reflex. Was really nice to see AJ interacting with Wallflower too. Great work!