Wallflower Blush is determined to make sure her first date with Starlight goes well. No matter how many times she needs to try.
An entry into the 2023 May Pairings Contest.
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Some of them want to use you, some of them want to be used by you/Some of them want to abuse you, some of them want to be abused.
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Damn. Well done! You really balanced it out so they were perfectly romantic while also morally dubious.
You ever read a story and you're only about halfway into it and you already know it's quite good?
So far, I love how you use the little twists and turns that sometimes make this story quite funny.
EDITED A FEW MINUTES LATER TO SAY:
Excellent... 🔭
Hehe, kinda freaky and kinda cute. Can't say I envy them, but at least you know they're both hellbent on making it work
needs a bit of fixing here and there, but otherwise an interesting read.
I feel like you played your hand a little too early by having Starlight hint early on that she'd already experienced a date with Wallflower - but even so, that amazing reveal of Starlight's time magic still caught me off guard. ^^ I had assumed that the Memory Stone somehow didn't work on Starlight and that she was just faking, I didn't catch on to the idea that Starlight was redoing the date too. Gives me major Hard Reset 2 vibes.
Great fic.
I also love the twisted moral that they still continue to abuse magic in search of the perfect date, rather than just enjoying each other's company. It's self-destructive, but that's love for you.
This was really fun! Interesting that you didn't have them actually stop using their methods of redoing dates, but it makes sense for the depictions of Wallflower and Starlight here. Twilight and Sunset just watching this all unfurl from the sideline was cute.