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do not throw souls

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A few days before Hearth's Warming, Applejack and Flim fall down a hole.


Written for Fluid Apple for Jinglemas 2020.

Preread by forbloodysummer.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

This doesn't have any relevance beyond being the (loose) inspiration for this story's title, but a lovely piece of music is linked below.

Oh boy :/
This looks interesting, what was the promo?

Well that was a pretty interesting story so basically Applejack and Flim fell in the hole and basically now we're out of here so they just waited until somebody come over here and rescue them but while they're waiting they have a pretty interesting conversation with each other it's pretty nice of them to talk without being at each other's throats then Big Mac came and help them very good job on the story keep up the good work and Merry Christmas

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Applejack and...

... wait for it...

Flim.

Ha, that was pretty good! AJ had some good zingers in there, and I think you really captured Flim's sleaziness.

Thank you so much for writing this for me I really enjoyed it. I really like the idea of Flim having a little good in him, or some character development at the very least. Showing his sentimental side to AJ was just what I was hoping for from this.

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My pleasure, glad you enjoyed it! I was a little iffy about the prompt at first, since I didn't really care much for either of these characters, but they grew on me a lot as I wrote them and I was happy in the end to get outside my comfort zone a bit, so I'm glad you saw more in them than I did.

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