The Measure of Her Reach

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This story is a sequel to An Imperfect Paradise

Isabella was hoping to raise her interesting family in peace. Unfortunately for her it seems fate has other plans for her as she and Blueblood are placed on a collision course with the destiny of a realm and her populace. Time and again Isabella has seen the very ruins of such trials in her world get the better of past leaders, can she do better? Or is she doomed to share in their fate and be just a footnote in history?

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It Starts · 8th Dec 2020 · 1,391 words
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Isabella and the Cat · 8th Dec 2020 · 1,458 words
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Something Cryptic · 8th Dec 2020 · 1,030 words
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A Name? Umm...Lystra? · 8th Dec 2020 · 1,223 words
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Hein des Nisseroi

Hein des Nisseroi #1 · Dec 9th, 2020 · 1 · · It Starts ·

as unfinished models were forced out of Impulse Spark's make shift work shops

makeshift?

a bit of speculation over what the out come would be

outcome?

Hein des Nisseroi

Hein des Nisseroi #2 · Jan 4th, 2021 · · · Isabella and the Cat ·

though he has less outburst than his sister."

outbursts?

the chance to talk to her about somethings,

some things

speaking of it should be about lunch time by now.

Maybe a comma is needed behind ‘‘speaking of’’?

Hein des Nisseroi

Hein des Nisseroi #3 · Jan 7th, 2021 · · · A Name? Umm...Lystra? ·

a bit of an over hall and experiment for region.

overhaul?
‘‘for the region’’?

While His wife had taken most

Uppercase H should be lowercase.

interrupted by a few gasp,

gasps

with what they need to be come self sustaining

‘‘become self-sustaining’’

out of you own willful ignorance?

your

Teraunce

Teraunce #4 · Jan 9th, 2021 · · · It Starts ·

Isabella was resting peacefully after the birth of her twins. While there had been quite a bit of speculation over what the out come would be it was quite surprising when one appeared to be a normal human, while one was a perfectly normal unicorn...well, as normal as appearances go. Very early on, they had found out that this little filly had an odd magic trait. One that nopony seemed to be able to explain. Just one look into her eyes, at random times, could cause instant paralysis, which seemed to get stronger with each passing day.

That's what ya get for shape shifting while pregnant I suppose. Still quite unexpected.

Teraunce

Teraunce #5 · Jan 9th, 2021 · · · A Name? Umm...Lystra? ·

Interesting 7/10 start.

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