Who's got the sweetest disposition? Not this bunny! Though he truly wants to help Fluttershy out any way he can, he has a mighty unfriendly way of going about it. Through begging, bribery, and extortion, Angel Bunny will see to it that his caretaker comes out of her shell eventually.
Or else.
Alright, it came to my attention that Rarity's sister is Sweetie Belle, not Sweetie Bell. That's been fixed.
I also took it upon myself to fix one Capitalization error that I had missed, as well as one tense error.
If anyone sees an error, or wants to discus the story, or has any other comments, feel free to let me know.
This is the first FanFic I have put any real effort into.
Thanks for reading, and have a nice day!
Liked and Faved. It definitely is clear that you put a lot of work into this.
As for the story, I thought it was great. Very "day in the life"-esque and something that I could see happening on the show. It was all well thought out and made sense. Keep it up!
Chihuahua.
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Thanks! I certainly intend to keep it up, a month between updates or not. I'm working on finishing up the next chapter as we speak.
Ah! Thank you again. I could have sworn that i'd fixed that already. It's what I get for trusting spell check, eh?
This is almost as exactly correct as it can possibly be.
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I am almost extremely ecstatic that you could possibly think so.
I think that date went as well as can be expected.
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I sure like to think so. Thanks for reading!
*Grins and applauds* Very sweet and fun. This was great stuff an don't put yourself down, this was really awesome. Hour was a bit muddled as he didn't really give much explanation for his actions and emotions but really that's my only real complaint.
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Thank you! I was just reading this the other day, and I was actually surprised at how much fun it was. It really just needs a little spit polish on the grammar.
Yeah, i'll admit to not spending a whole lot of time plotting him out. He didn't explain his motivations because he didn't have all that much motivation beyond "Date Fluttershy, make silly pony swears." Live and learn, amiright?
That is low Diamon Tiara, that is fucking low. Already making fun of a pony with a disability is bad enough, but making fun of their deceased parents is crossing the fucking line.
Oh, clever Fluttershy, it wasn't Duck Season Rabbit Season, but she's still good.
She kinda did, she managed to demonstrate a healthy level of assertiveness WITHOUT either flying off the handle, or going on a rampage in Putting Your Hoof Down. Also, I just realized "Giving a flying feather" is probably the Cloudsdale equivalent of "giving a flying f*ck". Fluttershy essentially use a Precision F-Strike. Even Rainbow Dash isn't that bad. Good thing she calmed down.
I like this. I really really do. You portray the Mane 6 so well, Fluttershy is still the same adorable timid pony we met in Mare In The Moon, yet she's grown up so much, she's managing to show a healthy level of assertion so that she can carry a normal conversation with Diamond Tiara, albeit this IS her area of expertise so she is more comfortable then she would be then say, talking about magic. She is still obviously a bit nervous, but either way, it shows how she's still trying to be nice despite the fact that she probably knows from the CMC that Diamond Tiara is NOT a nice pony. It also shows that while Diamond is a jerk and a bully, she is not an unrepentant monster and like everypony else, has potential to change.
EveRypony. Also, Diamond Tiara, you are going to want to take that back, apologize, and be VERY careful with your words if you don't want bronies and pegasisters to tear you a new structurally superfluous behind.
Nopony, not no one. And yeah, she's awesome.
What a nice pony.
At least she's polite.
PHOTO! Y U SO FUNNY!
Somewhere, Lauren Faust, Discord and Ahuizotl sneezed.
Bruce Wayne AND Tony Stark as ponies? You flatter us.
Good to know Fluttershy's lessons about knowing when to assert herself in her own way have worked.
Dang it Angel, you should know better! Also, I like how while Angel is a bit of a jerk, he honestly does care about Fluttershy.
The lion is now Simba.
In other words, Zecora is best zebra.
How much you want to bet that Discord is the inventor of surrealism? Seriously, Equestria under his rule looks like a surrealist painting brought to life.
Oh dear...
You don't like her spinach puffs! You monster!
Oh boy...
Oh boy...
It's gonna hit someone. I can feel it.
Oh dear...
Oh double dear...
That works.
Nice one.
Yeah, not her best moment.
This won't end well.
You did that on purpose.
Bulk works at the Silver Spoon? Headcanon accepted!
Clever.
Cheese Sandwich. You know, Weird Al pony?
With a bit of luck, with a touch of kindness here and there, now and then, Diamond can become a nicer pony. I'm not holding my breath, but I can dream.
Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful!