After running away from Ponyville, Trixie is on her way to Canterlot, the greatest city in all of Equestria. But what's a mare to do when her very bread and butter is yanked away from her, or when her biggest enemy is not the purple unicorn she blames, but her own self? Well, you'll have to wait and see, as the Great And Powerful Trixie continues on her journey.
*There will be more comedy in later chapters. Also I'm bad writing descriptions.
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Chapters (8)
After reading, please take into account that...
This is my first Fan-fiction, and is not, to me, an amazing feat
This story does have a developing plot and a moral at the end
I will take suggestions left in the comments for improvement, story events, etc.
And yes, this will have many more chapters!
Thank you for reading!
(But it's not like the GAPT needs YOUR respect, anyway!)
P.S. Please point out any mistakes! Thanks!
I'll add this to my 'Read Later' list. I've gone over the first chapter pretty quickly; just skim reading. It's pretty good otherwise.
Great start so far, Trixie is a good character to develop on, I wasn't expecting Braeburn though (Not that it's a bad thing, just surprised). This should be interesting, I look forward to reading more chapters in the future.
Not a bad start, consider your self "watched".
Not mah kindor thang. +1 liek for efort thoe
Cheese problems are serious medical conditions, guys.
Trixie is going to set up a show?
Good grief.
Now Trixie made enemies out of the Wonderbolts. She better get out ot Canterlot and keep a VERY low profile. I have no idea what it will take for her to learn she doesn't have to be a bitch and a liar in order to get the attention she never received as a filly. However, I think it's already too late. I expect Trixie to receive a nice flank kicking very soon.
Got the weekend to work on this, and I want to get as close to finishing as possible.
Oh, and a big thanks to the wonderful people reading this. It means a lot that you like it.
Not a flank kicking, but Trixie sure did get one hell of a blow to the head. She's going to be loopy for quite a bit.
Wait until she finds out who the librarian is. Wait until the librarian sees her. And I hope she doesn't run into Rainbow Dash. Trixie will end up in the hospital. I think she already has a mild concussion.
I eagerly await the next chapter.
Twilight's good heart is enough to stop her from fighting, but you just wait till they have to live together...
So now, Trixie is wanted for assault. If that was the case, why wasn't she arrested while she was sitting on the stage all day? Why did the guards let Braeburn leave with her? There were enough witnesses and time that charges should have been made.
Wait a minute. Isn't there a pony already named Carrot Top?
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Well Twilight is friends to two of Ponyville's premier pranksters. So long as they don't run into the real Carrot Top the disguise works.
1288107 Yeah, but knowing Trixie's luck...
This is true, I'll just have to wait and find out.
You never know who you could meet in a hospital...
Oh, Twilight.
I thought Applejack was supposed to be the silly pony.
I knew there was a Carrot Top.
And it seems those teenagers decided to get Trixie in more trouble since they weren't allowed to finish what they started (I really hope they get whats coming to them.
) What are the two unicorns going to do now?
So much for Trixie's luck. Now the fun begins.
good update,
Comedy?
That sad, sad, chapter. Ignorance of love. All alone in s scorching desert.
*deep breath*
AND YOU HAVE THE BALLS TO CALL THIS A COMEDY?!