• Member Since 30th Aug, 2012
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silverbronygirl43


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Fluttershy, in need of a medicine ingredient, has to venture into the Everfree Forest. Unsure of the journey, she fearfully creeps toward the forest. Her fears prove to be correct when thing turn out a little bit...dark.

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And now, we have SlenderShy........:fluttershysad:

I like it, But something seems off to me, I can't tell what, maybe it just seems to be going to fast, ah well It's pretty good to me so far keep it up.

Oh, so it's just SlenderMan okay , :derpytongue2:, Hmm, is it the flower, or a creature? OR IS IT A-ugh-FLOW-eature?

1227216 Yeah, I kind of rushed through it here and there.

1227253 I'm not really sure what you're talking about.

Any suggestions for improvements would gladly appreciated. As you can probably tell I need all the help i can get. :twilightsmile:

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