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The Sleepless Beholder


I just headbutt the keyboard till my ideas spill out into writing. Sometimes it works.

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Have you ever just sat down and thought about everything that you are and what you know? Have you ever wondered, how much of that is real? How many of those thoughts are actually yours?

Inspired by Blue Wallflower, which you should go read.

Reviewed by Red Parade: Review

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10526438
Thank you :twilightsmile: I honestly tought it would be shorter than this

J_Q

Dude. This was way too real for me.

10526757
I based most of this off my own experiences, so I feel ya.

"I miss the ocean"

The way I interpret this ending line, it's that Wallflower enjoys being passive, even if it means being told what to do, being abused by others, etc. "The ocean" is like something she can sink into and wallow in to avoid her responsibilities.

Thank you for the mention. :twilightsmile:

10526873
Thank you for the inspiration! This wasn't a thing until I read your story.

this was a dang good story, wow

(Follow-up where Sunset smooches her when?)

10531749
Glad you liked it :scootangel:

Oh don't worry, I will write more Sunflower soon :raritywink:

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