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Wrestling AU
Sunset Shimmer X Dusk Shine/Rule!63 Twilight Sparkle.

Dusk Shine is a charming nerdy scientist who spends time with his female friends and especially his girlfriend Sunset Shimmer. She is a caring kind girlfriend to Dusk, but in her day job as a professional wrestler she is a smug brute of a heel.

Title picture is Sunset Shimmer by avispaneitor on Deviantart, used with permission.
https://www.deviantart.com/avispaneitor

Similar to my Lovers in Kayfabe story.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

good fight I always appreciate creative works and this was a clear definition of that plus I'm glad it was dusk shine and sunset shimmer as there is not an abundant amount of these stories.
a spectacular job

This is 10 times better than your other wrestling story.

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Thanks thought what makes it better

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Talking about mine

Though do you think that you can please tell me what you think of this one?

Despite the grammar errors and how short it was, this was good.

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Thanks, anything in particular you like

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Their relationship, maybe

Very little I can say other than excellent job on this one-shot. Admittedly, it's been years since I've been into professional wrestling, but I have to admit this was a really sweet story with some great reflection and characterization.

Certainly looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.

Surprised by how little Sunset Dusk stories there are, counting this one i think i only found two or three.
Not bad short and sweet.

Hey cornholio, I just realized this paragraph got f***** up badly. It repeats the same thing you wrote twice before getting to the point. I don't know how you, me, or the other readers missed this, but if you have some time to fix it later that would be great, if you're not busy.

The next night came and Dusk wearing a CWL licensed Sunset shirt was a bit overwhelmed at the big packed wrestling arena, he had gone to concerts before with his friends but this seemed different. He ended up getting into it The next night came and Dusk was a bit overwhelmed at the big packed wrestling arena, he had gone to concerts before with his friends but this seemed different. He ended up getting into it and was enjoying himself and gotten ready when it was time for Sunset’s match.

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Fixed it thanks
Got my own fanfiction wrestling story if you ever want to please r and r at some point since I have twilight on the roster and it has different fiction characters on the roster
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13839254/1/Muliversal-Elite-Wrestling

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Thanks for fixing it and I'll check it out when I can

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