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Kink-182
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Fake and gay.
But in the best possible way.
This story really makes me feel large and in-charge.
Is there any hand-holding in this story?
10525049
Oh my dear, sweet summer child... The first 2000 words are hand-holding. Very mature stuff.
i'm afraid to sit down after reading this because i m afraid that i will sti on tiny peeple :(
10525053
Brb on my way to burn down your house, degenerate swine.
10525083
Thanks for agreeing to preread before I had anybody to turn to! You're the real MVP!
10525083
>Anthro
I saved you, buddy.
Worth.
10525266
Thanks again for commissioning me and putting faith in my work! I really appreciate you and how wonderful you were to work with. Keep it real!
This is simply the best. Well done.
Not only does this give me the big peen, it's cute as fuck. Love their interaction so much.
Well done, friend.
10526249
Thank you so much! I love writing Spike and Starlight because they have such a fun dynamic. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reads fic.....No mass death, Futa or unaware giantess that cause looming sens of death and loss of power over one's self with a loving couple ..... I LOVE IT
10545311
I'm so glad you like it! Thank you so much!
What is this?! Wholesome, loving, consensual macro?! HAVE YOU NO DECENCY, GOOD SIR?!
luv eet bby
Upon reading:
"Can I cook, or can I cook?"
For real, I think you nailed the emotional side of this. Spike and Starlight genuinely felt like a couple just past the "blazing puppy love" phase of romance, and are a bit more familiar with each other. Dialogue was great, and they both felt pretty real.
The sex was also well done... but I will assume you've never written this sort of kink before, nor is it your particular cuppa joe. For example, the growth was almost instantaneous. And while an exact size isn't always necessary, it's a good idea to give some idea of the scale, or at least size difference. Should you ever write this sort of thing again, I'd advise you draw out the growth. That is a huge button for me, and most other macro fans. Vivid descriptions of things like her feeling her body stretching, the growing tightness of her clothing becoming almost painful, her grunting as she hears the seams of her clothes popping and ripping, the relief after she outgrows them entirely. Sounds like her skin stretching like tightening rubber or strained rope, her moans growing deeper and becoming so loud the walls shake. Spike feeling the tremors as the ground strains to hold her massive frame. And the pure pleasure of simply growing inducing a massive orgasm as she finishes.
Also, a sense of scale adds a lot of eroticism. Maybe her fist could completely encase Spike. How high up does he come to her when standing up. Can she crush a bolder in her hand? Also Spike's reactions would be nice. Does he feel any sense of inadequacy? If so, does it turn him on? Or is it something they need to talk about, thus adding to their romance? Maybe he feels a thrill at seeing the pony he loves now so much stronger than him. Maybe when she crushes the aforementioned boulder, a jet of pre stains his jeans.
IN a delicious sense of irony, it's the little things that matter when it comes to writing macro and growth fetish stuff. Still, this was a commission, which means all that added wordplay would have cost the commissioner more money. And since it seems that 10525266 is pleased with your work, that's good enough for me! All in all, very cute, very mushy in all the right ways, and very hawt. Great job, my dude!
10583259
Yeah, I did have him put a smidgen more focus on the visuals and contrast, even pointed to one of my own works at the beginning as an example, but the cute romantic dialogue he excels at is half of what I asked for. If I want something to cater to my tastes exactly I just write it myself.
10583298
Ha! Yeah, that's the rub. I have so many ideas for clopfics, but the ideas are so specific that if I hired someone else to write it, they would never match what I have in my head.
Amazing
Lucky spike
I assume you got the name from the song?