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SwordTune


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Mistwake, a young hippogriff student, begins attending the School of Friendship. Her roommate is annoying, she can't stop thinking of home, and there's something off about her pink-haired professor. Horrors hidden in the dark are beginning to reveal themselves.

When her roommate starts coming back to their dorm in the middle of the night, she knows something is definitely wrong. Or is it? Students overworking isn't exactly breaking news. Then again, what exactly could she be working on in the middle of the night?

(Written for "A Change of Pace" Contest. This is my first piece conceived and written for a contest. I'm not exactly sure if I made it on time for the deadline because of timezone differences. If I did, neat. If not, I still like the story. Also, it's written for the Halloween season. Boom, two birds with one story.)

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Heya! I was one of the judges on the Change of Pace contest and I've only just got around to posting my reviews. Blog post here: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/937656/change-of-pace-contest-reviews

Howdy, hi!

A review form the mansion to you,

Weeeeeeeeelp. The title says it all. Lol. Very well done.

“Hey!” I watched pink feathers pop up and out of the room adjacent to mine. “So you must be Mistwake!” I recognized immediately who had suddenly begun gripping and shaking my talon.

So, you must be Mistwake!

so must have a comma.

“Oh, right,” Silverstream laughed, kicking out her own legs. “Takes time getting used to using these everywhere, huh? Don’t worry, you’ll get used to them. ”

used to them." you have a space there. Which I caught.

My Little review & Feedback I did your review.

Gotta say, I do love a good vampire story

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