This is a Power Lottery story about a guy who gets sent to the Crystal Empire before anyone from the show arrives not counting Sombra. How will the Equestrians react to the new King of the Crystal Empire who isn't even a pony.
I would like to see more advancement and upgrades to the kingdom itself, maybe raise it vertically with crystal magic and make it a hive city from 40 k, you know, just not with all the corruption and starvation and everything else in the 40k universe.
This is a far better chapter, remember that a MC can be good but still do bad things when NEEDED.
When it comes to corrupting someone it is better to do it over time rather than in one setting.
Also remember that Morals and alignment are two different concepts, a character can be morally bankrupt but still do good things and vice versa. If you want to sex slave Barb do it in a way that makes sense to how the character acts to others, make it mold to how you want this MC to be and how you want him to act in general.
I would like to see more advancement and upgrades to the kingdom itself, maybe raise it vertically with crystal magic and make it a hive city from 40 k, you know, just not with all the corruption and starvation and everything else in the 40k universe.
This is a far better chapter, remember that a MC can be good but still do bad things when NEEDED.
When it comes to corrupting someone it is better to do it over time rather than in one setting.
Also remember that Morals and alignment are two different concepts, a character can be morally bankrupt but still do good things and vice versa. If you want to sex slave Barb do it in a way that makes sense to how the character acts to others, make it mold to how you want this MC to be and how you want him to act in general.
Is this a repost, at least partially? Much of this seems very familiar to me.
Well looks like the armoury and forge are getting busy and looking forward to seeing how the new armor and weapons turn out
Yeah, it's much better, thank you. I really want to see how you turn out with your character's plan's.
I personally liked the more violent one better but to each their own its your story im just a reader
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yes it is it the first version was more violent than it should have been so I changed it