This is a Power Lottery story about a guy who gets sent to the Crystal Empire before anyone from the show arrives not counting Sombra. How will the Equestrians react to the new King of the Crystal Empire who isn't even a pony.
Hmm well the battles was pretty nice and well done and I liked how Jekyll got into his armor before the battle. I have a feeling his axe is like the Marauders axe from DOOM ETERNAL. Now just need to wait to see the two sisters reactions when they learn what happened at the fight. Im looking forward to see how would Barb explain things to the king and how Shinning, soon to be Gleaming, will handle the genderbending and what will happen after it
I just have one nitpick. The battle was great but I noticed that the Elements seem to have disappeared from the story. There is no way Twilight is going to sit back and let our hero take her brother.
from twilight and her friends you can deal with it in the next chapter as for example they tried to throw themselves where they shouldn't have and the guards caught them and thrust them into prison. : )
Well this got far darker then I thought it would, and I was just starting to really enjoy it too.
things are changing so fast
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Do you think I over did it
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Do you think I need to slow down
Hmm well the battles was pretty nice and well done and I liked how Jekyll got into his armor before the battle. I have a feeling his axe is like the Marauders axe from DOOM ETERNAL. Now just need to wait to see the two sisters reactions when they learn what happened at the fight. Im looking forward to see how would Barb explain things to the king and how Shinning, soon to be Gleaming, will handle the genderbending and what will happen after it
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That's one overpowered boomstick Jekyll goes why why
I just have one nitpick. The battle was great but I noticed that the Elements seem to have disappeared from the story. There is no way Twilight is going to sit back and let our hero take her brother.
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I honestly actually forgot about her
from twilight and her friends you can deal with it in the next chapter as for example they tried to throw themselves where they shouldn't have and the guards caught them and thrust them into prison. : )
Can't wait for more chapters.
You jinxed it didn't you.
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Better to have to much than not enough.