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When Rainbow Dash told Pinkie her plan to prank the whole town, She got everyone together and came up with a plan to turn the tables on her friend to teach her a lesson in pranking.

But, what if she didn’t come out for the prank?

What if instead of witnessing Pinkie’s prank, she shut herself in her house to protect herself from the wrath of the cookie zombies? How would Pinkie react? More importantly, how would all of Ponyville react?

An alternate ending to 28 Pranks Later, and the first in my alternate ending series.

Happy Halloween!

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So- sorry we didn't heed you're call~.

Ba boom boom ba ba~.

We're staying at home now~.

We would have picked up the phone, but we'd rather be alone~.

And your zombie plot certainly sounded fun~!

Rainbow will get back at you, it's something she'll certainly do~.

Leave a note so she knows you called~!

Leave a message~!

Name and number~!

C'mon~! Leave a message~!

Start Spike up at the tone~!

Spike, the message taker.

Yo, this was awesome! I loved being able to see a hidden part of the episode at the beginning; where we saw the period from the other characters' perspectives! The overall plot... worked amazingly well! It was an alternate ending that still kept the episode going! I was able to refer back to it the entire time! And then the end; it gave off nice surprises! The fact that Dash didn't know it was a prank; that gives you a different perspective on the story you might not have seen before!

I count myself lucky that I clicked on the search button at the time that this story was at the top! I have added it to two bookshelves with obvious names, which you should see notifications of! Great work all-around! :twilightsmile:

I'm faving this story.

I always liked fanfics of this episode that shows an alternate ending in which Ponyville's prank gets foiled inadvertently by Rainbow or by a third party.

1. Why are the ponies that came up with the prank running away from the zombies?

2. Nobody in this story should be mad. If twilight was shaking me like she did rainbow I would have slapped her. And if they started yelling at me like they did rainbow I would have told them to go f*ck themselves.

A Halloween special before the story I was waiting for

This is a good story, but I can't shake the feeling this was rushed.

10490704

Yeah, Twilight is just being a angry jerk. Besides, Rainbow should be madder in this. I mean, Zombies are NOT a joke here. And making Rainbow Dash think that her Friends, Family, and Everyone in pony into Mindless Zombies for a terrible prank is very cruel on their part.


They SHOULD Apologize to Rainbow Dash at least.


And I agree that if Twilight TRIED to do that to me. I qould be more violent and HIT her weak points in the Eyes, Horn, and Wings. And tell them all to NEVER do that to me again, or I Taser your dumb butts to the ground.

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On top of that they’re upset because their plan failed and just wanna blame rainbow.

Plus, no one told them to get scared by their own prank. How does that even work?

Also, f*ck a taser. To my knowledge none of them know how to fight, so I’m gonna use that to my advantage.

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Well, screw them for trying to blame Rainbow Dash. Can't the Author edit it a little so Rainbow could at least be angry, and criticize them for the prank.


So No Taser? Ok. Since they want to pretend to be "Zombies" so badly. I gonna have to my use Zombie-Proof CHAINSAW!!!!!


* Now wearing my Special Doomslayer Armor with an Anti-Magic Shield, along with a Customized Jetpack, and arm myself with the Legendary DOOM Chainsaw for Demons, Zombies, Monsters, etc..*

Me ( Acting like Leatherface from Texas Chainsaw Massacre and Jake Baker from Resident Evil 7): "YOU BETTER START RUNNING, YOU COOKIE EATING ZOMBIE STALLIONS AMD MARES!!!!!!!!!" 😈😈😈 :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:


Twilight, Main Four, Starlight, CMC, and Ponyville Citizens: 😱 😰 😫 :twilightoops: :raritydespair: :pinkiegasp: :fluttershbad:


Rainbow Dash: :rainbowderp: 😥


Me: Wait, come back! I just want poke you with my "Toy" Chainsaw. ( I'm lying. I using a REAL CHAINSAW this time!!!!!!!!) :pinkiecrazy:

10496942
That is amazing:rainbowlaugh:

10497230

I aim to please. 😂 Plus, I HATE the Ponies acting like arrogant jerks. They should be ashamed. 🙄

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They should be more ashamed about the fact they got scared of a prank they set up themselves.

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They aren't really smart, and have weak wills. Their acting like very dumb Teenagers and Young Adults in Cliche Horror Movies/Shows.

10497413
The only difference is they didn’t f*cking die.

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Agreed on that. Nevertheless, they should act smarter next time. 😒

10497430
I don’t think smart is their thing.

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🤷 Well, their loss. For being Stupid Idiots.

My feedback:

  • I don’t think those speeches are what they usually say.
  • I heard no apologies from Twilight and the others.
  • I wished this has a ‘sad’ tag.

Freakazoid reference.

I’m confused why Twilight’s do pissed off??

Or what’s so complicated about Dash hiding from what she thought were actual zombies?

10490704
Yeah agreed a lot of that scene confused me they could’ve yelled for everyone to stop and they would’ve stopped the prank unless they were actually zombie’s?
But they weren’t?

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It might have something to do with twilight being a control freak and expecting her plans to work 100% of the time.

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It reminds me of the two scene from Phineas and Ferb: Night of the Living Pharmacists, where Buford and Doofenshmirtz take off their clothes and yell, "FRESH MEAT!" and went running so the Doof Zombies follow them.

If Rainbow Dash, she will hide herself she never show up, there's cookie zombies prank they will failed.

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