• Published 27th Oct 2012
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Fabulosity in Fact - Crowley



You're a celebrity. Rarity tries to restore your faith in fashion after you lose it in Canterlot.

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Holy crap, new Crowley fic! And Rarity, no less! :pinkiegasp:

Guh! yesss no sleep for me!

Hey Crowley! Long time, no see! Gonna read this later. Where was that list of yours that showed what stories you are gonna do?

Nice,:eeyup: your stories are the best:scootangel:

New Crowley story? F Yes.. reading now! :pinkiehappy:

Next stop: featured stories.

I'm going to go ahead and congratulate you on another good story. I haven't read it yet, but like your others, I'm sure it's good. You along with Swiper the Fox and a couple of others were a round about inspiration for my erotica. Thank you very much.

I love your work and I hope that you continue to make more.

SL

Playing a game, left Fimfic on. Hear sound and smile largely seeing new story.:pinkiehappy:

First, I was like "EWWWW, clop! Grosssssss"
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Then I was like "oh, its a Crowley fic? ride on!"

Ahem,

*clears throat*

inb4 featured.

Seriously though, can't wait to read this. Your stories, man... great stuff.

NEW CROWLEY FIC!


:yay:

The only issue is the fact that it has Rarity as top billing. Most would rather read a ship fic between anonymous pony and Crackle the dragon.

Also this fic needs more drowning.

New Crowley clop fic?

Sleep will have to wait :rainbowdetermined2:

>Put in Sparity group
>No Spike tag

WHY DID YOU DESTROY MY OTP WITH DECEPTION!?

oh.....
OH SHIT. OH SHIT OH SHIT. CROWLEY. NEW FIC. NEW CROWLEY FIC. CROWLEY RARITY FIC. YOU CANNOT FATHOM HOW READY I AM FOR THIS. :pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::raritystarry:

Does this mean that we get a best pony fic next? I'd prefer it with a different "me" but I'll take what I can get.

Not enough Octavia in this fandom. :(

Oh shit, new Crowley fic! :pinkiehappy:

Not normally a fan of Rarity, myself, but this story managed to keep my interest quite easily.

something i've noticed about your work that i've been wanting to say for a while now, is that you capture the personalities of the 'mane' six extremely well. none of the fandom's stereotypes and conjecture i read your stories, and it's like i'm watching an episode of the show. just thought you'd like to hear that.

Browsing fics i've read..
Come across Crowley. god i love his work...
Sees that hes working on a new rarity fic and it should be out soon...
Im a patient type of person i can wait a few more days...
Browse other fics thinking to myself they cant be as good as Crowley's fics...
refresh the page...
notice a new notification...
Crowley has just uploaded a fic...

:raritywink:My body was not ready..:raritystarry:

Ah, yet another good "you" fic. The humor was good and I liked the characterization and the unique protagonist. I can't say the ending was in my realm of appreciation since I hate bittersweet stories/endings, but that doesn't make the story any less than what it is. Thanks for granting me my feel good quota for the evening Mr. Crowley.

If you took the time to actually find out, Octavia has a real last name. Her name is Octavia Philharmonica.

New Crowley fic!

And I was just wondering earlier when the Rarity fic would be finished. :raritywink:

So technically at the end, the OC falls for Octavia? If so, I smell a sequel involving that. Hope Spike never realizes what the OC did with Rarity and that he could have a shot at her.

Why is this thing in the Sparity group? Every time I get a notice that says a new story has been added, I expect some ACTUAL Sparity, not this. Is the guy who made the group a total blowhard? Signs point to yes, but I guess I'll find out for myself.

Very satisfying story, I liked the ending as well. Hopefully there may be follow up between the narrator and Tavi, but if not I still enjoyed the story. Everyone was in character, it progressed well and the sex scene was well enough to where it felt "classy" rather than "raunchy". Great work.

Ehh... I didn't like how Rares was willing to just... You know, but whatever. It's YOUR interpretation of her, so there's no need for me to act like it's canon or something! XD Excellently written as always, and thanks for an ending that isn't automatically happy and whatnot! :3

All right LETS DO THIS! *takes big Breath* LEEROOY!!! JENKINS!

But in all seriousness: FUCK YEAH! A NEW CROWLEY FIC!

Well Done Crowley. Well done, You've done it again!

1513892 The chocobo thanks you for the compliment! :3 (Also, it's you're, not your. :raritywink: )

*Clap Clap Clap*

Expected Nothing less

Holy crap! New Crowley story! I will no proceed to stop everything and read this.

why is it in the sparity folder:rainbowhuh:

....Oh my god.

Dude, I'm stuck in my mind on wondering whats next.

100th LIKE!

I'M SPECIAL!

Also, fantabulous story.

That flank... one day It shall... BE MINE! Unzt unzt unzt ooo dah dah dah.

Another excellent fic by Crowley! It's not my favourite Crowley fic, but still wonderful as always.
Also, why so many dislikes? :rainbowhuh:

I FUCKING LOVE IT.

Also “First things first.” she says, “We finish the dresses, release the magazine, restore your reputation, then - and only then - we fornicate like sexually ravenous beasts! Deal?”

I laughed. Hard.

Good show mate. good fucking show.

Hmm...
I'd say...
Well, give magazine to succsesor, move to ponyville, live with Rarity. Or just visit very often.

1514814
Some idiot took my fic and put it in a "Sparity folder" without my knowledge, and because it wasn't supposed to be there (nor did I intend it to be), everyone insta-disliked without a second glance.

Stay frickin' classy, Fimfic.

1515023 Damn, that sucks man.
Hope you can move it out of that group soon!

I scrolled right past the clop scene... what's happened to me!? The story carried itself just fine without that, is what.

Great stuff. The PoV-pony started out as a smarmy bastard, so he was maybe a little hard to relate to, but he was all right at the end there. Rarity was loveable as always.

Four thousand bits for capturing a mugger seemed jarringly high, but then again, significantly less than two thousand bits for the filly's family would have seemed insulting, maybe. I know how it feels to have two points in a story that don't quite mesh, and that the "adapter" can be a bit ugly sometimes. I probably would have used the same solution.

1515088
Granted, he was a pretty famous and successful mugger, appearing here in a news article (and featuring in my Trixie fic), and since most ponies in Canterlot are rich (and the mugger is praying specifically on the rich folk) 4,000 bits would be a reasonable enough amount for a ruch person to pay, considering the amount of money the mugger would have taken beforehand. He obviously wouldn't be worth 4,000 bits in somewhere like Ponyville, however.

Another amazing read!!! I loved that ending :rainbowlaugh: and I would love to see a sequal someday.

1515104
Ah, I see. Not having read that other story, I was a bit in the dark on that. It also might be, that big rewards for capturing a crook are more of a thing in the US culture than way over here. The expectation is no reward at all, or something in proportion to the trouble rather than the benefit to society. Like his hospital costs for the facial bruising, in this case.

New Crowely fic? YES! This is gonna be good!

Yay! :yay: The new Crowley Fic is finally here but now there are no more Ponies he can write about now :raritydespair: Unless some good single background ponies show up in season 3 :pinkiecrazy: I'm looking forward to this story defiantly an instant fav because it IS CROWLEY :pinkiehappy:

Loved this one, despite how bittersweet it may have been.

1515282
True, true. I was toying with the idea of parodying US culture by having a "Wanted Alive" poster of the mugger with the reward under it. Of course, that would involve giving the character an appearence to go by, and since he's the star of the Trixie fic, his main benefit is having the readers' imagination fill the gaps of what he looks like. As such, the idea was void.

Fuck yeah Crowley, continuing the tradition of great work.

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