... Dayum... Stupid reality... Where's Pinkie when you need her?! I need her to screw reality so I can be together with Miss Rarity!

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........FCUK!
yes I wrote it like that on purpose

1515864 I never write it like that, unless I experence a time FCUK.
1514968 dont be a grammer griffin!
1514741 i am the canterlot scoundrel and trix and I broke up 2 weeks ago

this comment is a joke

Figures. I was getting really weird deja vu in the first half of this. Don't leap between two different stories like that...

ANOTHER REFERENCE! Well...know we know what happend to the scoundrel on that fateful night. and I like that you used rarity being homesick as a why for her to miss her friends. I wonder what you will do this time.

Trixie saw what you did there.

Seriously, when the scene first started I drew the line right there. All of my kudos Crowley. All of them.

Trixies story has been my favourite one of yours so far and i was happy to see the obvious link. I noticed in an earlier chapter you made a subtle reference but this actual crossing of paths made me laugh. The moment i noticed it i laughed cause i guessed rarity mustve been the one who knocked him out whereas whilst reading the other story i thought it mustve been a guard. An interesting surprise.

1513892 That's not a bad thing. If he's in the comments, it normally means it's a good story!!

What should "I" do, stay in Canterlot with many mares, or return to Ponyville with one mare??

Canterlot it is!!!

1878632 I'd rather opt for Ponyville, at least there it's more "predictable" among mares...

Must go to Ponyville, it has Rainbow Dash.

lol, well, now I know who knocked out scoundrel (or myself from your other story) and was about to get mugged by the same Scoundrel that beat the hoof out of his manager sometime ahead? well isn't this a weird day to be me/ the readers huh?

Ouch! Rarity knocked me out to save....me? Like I've said before, don't forget the warnings!
WARNING! THOSE WHO HAVE READ Love-locked and BreathlessWILL RECEIVE EXTREME BLUNT-FORCE TRAUMA TO THE CRANIUM. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!

I like how all your stories are connected in some way. It makes your readers go "Oh hey! I remember this part from <insert story title here>!". That's pretty creative.

You’d made it to The Smart Ass, the famous fabric-and-clothing store run by the most refined and respected donkey in Canterlot

Ah... I see you're talking about yourself in that line.