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Equestria Buck Yeah


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Here's my testing the waters with this type of thing. Did I sink, swim or raise the Titanic? Metaphorically speaking! :facehoof:

You did not sink or swim, you went water-skiing

man, i must be a bucking bad-ass!! :raritystarry:

Nicely written, the first person view was kind of weird at first, but it works well.

2048480 pretty sure you turned back time and prevented titanic from sinking by using your awesome superpowers that you aquired by befriending Hitler when he was a child successfully preventing the holocaust too:pinkiehappy:

2048940
Yeah, it was a little odd trying to write it that way at first, but little by little it came around. Glad you like! :raritywink:

2048942
:pinkiegasp: Is there a TARDIS around that I'm not aware of? Cuz that would be kewl!

2048949

not a problem, would love to see more from you in the future, for it was very tastefully presented.

Fucking followed, liked and faved.

I enjoyed every bit of this, pal. Good work, lately the HiE Clop has been really tumbling, it's very nice to see some good ol' fashioned here. Loved it, job well done.

Wonderful detail (I loved how sloppy it got :heart:) as well, keep it up!

2049137
Wow, thanks! I'm pretty flattered this has gotten such positive reception so far. :twilightsheepish: Didn't know I could write clop as well as people have been saying. But hey, if people like it, then that's fine with me!

Well i like it you did a good job. Thank you for the storie. :rainbowdetermined2:

Niceeroony

Enjoyable and a great read. many derps for you sir/mam/reptile:derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpyderp1::derpyderp2:

2049437
Glad ya like! And thanks for the watch! :raritystarry:

2049453 *looks through your window* no problem...thats a nice lamp you got there.

2049475 Dont be afraid, im a good guy...mostly:pinkiecrazy:

2048942

Downside to that, is that radar wasn't invented, so that means TV wasn't invented, and the microwave oven wasn't invented yet. We'd still be 1930's era tech.

Oh wow! Featured! :pinkiegasp: Thank you all so much! :heart:

Loved it keep it up!!

Edit: nevermind that but May I get another Clop-fic please??:yay::yay:

I liked it.

A little humor here and there.

Nice job on the feature!

2049914
Haha, I don't know, that was my first. I'm more the epic story type, but if the mood strikes, more may follow! Want to try and be as versatile as I can.

2049917
Thanks! My first feature! So awesome! :rainbowkiss:

>a total lack of meat in your diet
"You" will die a horrible death

>You never all that that good at small talk
Miss a word?

>With a mock seductive look, you slowly, deliberately, moved onto the next finger and then the next
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>It didn't hurt that was could very sweet
wat

>at least one part of you is comfortable with the fact that Rarity was a pony
This should say "Rarity is a pony"

>The unique feeling send a shockwave
I think that should be "sends"

2048940 This is second person, not first person :moustache:

2049979
Ah, thanks. What happens when you don't have a proofreader. Derp. Gonna fix! :twilightblush:

2049739 Except that the radio was around in 1880, and while the first fully-electronic television was created in 1927, mechanical versions dated back to the 1880s. So, the invention of microwave ovens might be delayed, but with radio technology in place, it would happen eventually. TV would certainly be around, and the radio technology to broadcast it would be already existent. That being said, computer technology could've been set back 20 years without WWII. The ideas were there before the war, but government funding of computers during and post-WWII helped in the beginning. :facehoof:

Anyways, ponies. Nice story.

2050005 I also noticed an odd sentence, but it is not important :moustache:

2050082
Either way, I do appreciate the assistance. :twilightsmile:

Good stuff, all around.

2050089 I do appreciate the procrastination material :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

2050132
My pleasure, and yours too I suppose. :rainbowlaugh:

2050141 I said procrastination, not procrasturbation :trixieshiftleft:

2050141 love the story

2050150 love the profile pic

It was alright. Wish 'you' didn't refer to her as 'hon' or 'baby'. They really didn't have that kind of relationship, yet.

Oh, boy. Here we go. At first, I thought that title said "Sweet"! Then, I saw that mature tag.

Now, I know how to not be biased, so, I welcome all stories to my favourites! This one was a much better introduction then the other clop I read earlier, and I was glad to read this!

One glorious JonTron thumb for you!

2051102
Glad you like it! So tired of seeing so much clop (which normally I don't look at too much to begin with) that simply is there to scream 'LOOK, PORN WITH WORDS!', so I had to put in a bit of something behind it. Thanks for the watch too! :rainbowkiss:

Nothing against this author, nothing against this story.

But damn, it seems that every single second-person clopfic is making the featured box now.

I've never liked second person much: it kind of feels like the entire story is being crammed down your throat by some guy with a hairy arm. "You did this, You did that. You're thinking this"


110% honesty here. This story's written pretty good. It's not the best I've seen. But it's good.

2051271
Thank you for the critique either way. :twilightsmile:

Very well done I enjoyed it alot. Characterization and pacing were great. Looks to me like you've got some talent in the clop department, don't know if I'd call it 'the titanic' but this story raised something.:derpytongue2:





(So very sorry about that, you opened the door and I just could not help myself.:twilightblush:)

Comment posted by NTSTS deleted Jan 31st, 2013

Simply put, that was AWESOME!!!! :moustache:

Now, as far as one-shot clops go, this one is pretty well near the top of my list. Good writing, character development (for a short story), and, honestly, I am quite partial to first person fics.

Not a fan of humanXpony, but this is so great it deserves a thumbs up form mee. I also liked how you built up a relationship before the sex part. It really made it feel more genuine :raritywink:

5 of 6 spikes and a green thumb for you: :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

2052581
Thanks a bunch! :pinkiehappy: Glad ya like!

Definitely suggest you do more of these! You're quite talented at it!:pinkiehappy:

The thought of human x pony at first disgusted me cause of obvious reasons but after reading this and how well it was put together I was given a different perspective to look at it from. This is a fine piece of work and I wouldn't mind reading more of it. I hope you make a sequal =D

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