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Bronycommander
A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"
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awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story
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Okay...
Nice little oneshot, but one notices that your working up of the readers mood needs Improvment. Maybe its just me, but the women/mare more often than not need more, than a quicky to be fine. I as a reader love to get worked up, before the action main parts starts.
Overall nice clop, but its rather quickly over...
Also might i remind that anal can be, but shouldnt be rushed... Vaginal lube would be enough, but its still something that you cant just stick back in other holes without cleaning. Than again im more of the realistic detail watching readers so im a bit hard to be satisfied...
As already stated, nice little oneshot.
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well, I am low experienced, so can you blame me?
10839376
Nope, you stated its one of your first ones