Getting the Boot

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Really, Wind Sprint wasn't mad that she got shown out of the locker room. It was that the ponies outside of it were even more irritating than the elusiveness of the reason for being stuck with them.

Thanks to SockPuppet for prereading/editing.

WARNING: ♫ Making so much chatter ♫ Bout whey they're all breathin' fast ♫ Everypony looked past, and as I turned my lil' head I screwed up and got Locked Out ♫ (they won't let me in, they won't let me in....) ♫

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Posh

Posh #1 · Sep 16th, 2020 · 2 · ·

So the first few paragraphs all imply, unless I’m badly misreading the story, that there’s an orgy going on in the locker room.

...shouldn’t this have the Sex tag?

Vis-a-Viscera

Vis-a-Viscera #2 · Sep 16th, 2020 · 1 · ·

10437575

It's only implied though, would that count?

Posh

Posh #3 · Sep 16th, 2020 · 2 · ·

10437590 I mean, yeah? Crass sexual humor kind of underpins everything in here. The plot is literally that the protagonist gets kicked out of the locker room so her parents can host an orgy in it, and Patton Oswald shows up with a dildo.

Implied or no, it’s prominent enough that you should tag it.

Samey90

Samey90 #4 · Sep 16th, 2020 · · ·

Hey, I remember the Discord conversation behind this one

ScarletRibbon

ScarletRibbon #5 · Sep 16th, 2020 · · ·

10437590
Yes, implied counts. Especially when it's underpinning the entire story.

ThePinkedWonder

ThePinkedWonder #6 · Sep 16th, 2020 · · ·

10437590

The sex tag, when used with a teen rating, is used as a warning that the story contains lightly-charged sexual situations, innuendo, or vaguely implied (but not described!) sexual acts.

According to 'da site's rules of when to use the "Sex" tag, that'll be a "yes" on if this story needs it. I think only of it's very vaguely implied, or if this was an "M" rated story, would be when you don't use the tag.

On a related note

Plus, Wind was considering booking it back to the Castle of Friendship library, to find out what this ‘STD’ was. Was it some locker-room unlocking title? Probably why Fleur had bragged about Spoiled Rich and Rarity having them, too.

THAT gave me a huge laugh!

Vis-a-Viscera