Being home schooled and in one of the most remote places in the world can be hard. Especially when you don't have any friends and you are insanely shy. But when you get desperate and make a wish. Maybe something magical can happen. And maybe that magic can change your life by giving you the best gift ever - a friend forever.
Edited by stonedcookie
Authors note: This was another story that became stuck in my mind and I couldn't help but write it down. Whether or not people will like it is alright to me, as long as I wrote it and I enjoyed it. Anyway, if you wish to see more - then I will write more. As I always do.
Chapters (2)
...Interest grabbed.
One thing, "baker", not "backer".
I shall be watching.
A thing to edit:
A burst of white burst of energy plummeted. I'm guessing you meant either A burst of white energy plummeted or A white burst of energy plummeted.
Now make more of this tale.
1173333 Woops! Thanks for pointing that out, heh heh :3
1173372 Right, thanks! I will go over that soon.
1173476 Awww, ;'3 There will be more on the way, soon :3
This was a great read so far, it was sad, it was beautiful...and it's a POE("Pony on Earth" story), one of my favorite kinds of fan fiction!
I look forward to reading more of the story as it progresses and seeing how it turns out! 
It's happy and sad at the same time
I suggest getting an editor (or w/e they're called) to correct your mistakes.
Example: When the he was covered I broke down onto my knees and couldn’t stop.
They're not even major mistakes. Just some typos here and there. Nothing serious.
I enjoyed reading this alot, I really did and if you (or an editor) re-reads the story looking for mistakes and corrects them, it would be 20% cooler and people can enjoy it even more :)
1173599 I would really like to get a editor but I am rather shy myself to go ahead and ask people about it. But I have got some contacts that I could run the story by, so maybe. And thanks for pointing that error out as well, I normally forget to go over my work after writing it. Furthermore I am glad that you enjoyed reading this - and I am hoping to continue it soon. :3
I apologize if this is harsh, but am I the only one on this site who's sick of one-dimensional Mary Sues? Am I the only one who's sick of seeing endless My Little Dashie rip offs? Am I the only one who likes stories with characters written like real people who go through drama and conflict, and grow and change with new experiences, rather than cardboard cutouts that exist only to cuddle with magic talking horses?
I'm not opposed to fics with cuteness in them, but it only works for me if there is a compelling story of some kind as well. Otherwise, it's just porn with cuddling instead of sex. I have no idea why the community embraces this kind of Mary Sue, but despises Bloodshed Nightsorrow Azuremoon the alicorn-demon, secret seventh Element of Harmony, husband of Rainbow Dash, and other such nonsense. There's very little difference as far as I can tell.
1173812 I'm aright about you thinking this way, because it has some truth to it. Yes, some characters can be very Mary Sue and just be rather "one dimensional". But there is one big thing that MLD is that this isn't. My Little Dashie is about a father daughter relationship and explaining how fathers have to give up their children and let the grow by themselves. It happens, all the time. But this is something quite different - Ray (the main character) doesn't see Pinkie as his daughter, or sister. He see's her as a friend. The idea is to take someone of one personality and hit them with someone with the opposite. So the shy one becomes more confident by the confident one.
Yes, the idea of taking something from one world and throwing it into another and having the main character conviently come to the same place to meet them is used a lot. But I am trying something at a different angle, I am looking to see a friendship from a young age. I'm going into what life would be like to live with somepony like Pinkie from such a young age and then grown up. Then there are a load of different things to go over - for instance: How does a human village accept something like that?
But the reason why I am writing this is not out of the wanting for fame, or attention. I am only writing it because it makes me happy - to create a world and make it evolve and develop. Something like that just makes me warm inside, and when I believe that its right - it normally is.
If you have read the full comment - I thank you for your time. Have a nice day :3
my heart....strings......were moved by this story....my eyes. so much sadness and happyness at the same time....
*CLAP CLAP CLAP*
1174880 Wow, I never thought I would have that much of a effect. :3
1173501 awesome, cant wait
...Genius.
1195836 Agreed
1194759 Why thank you :3
This is good so far. I hope you continue writing.
Man, personally for me, this was a great chapter, even if you took so long
1467583 Thank you :3
1467125 I will, and thank you :3
.... *Sneaks in*
*Reads story*
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I'm dead.