Max has a normal, ordinary life. His job keeps his life going and nothing really special happens. But as certain events start to happen things become more extraordinary and a lot more special. As events and things happen Max's understanding of the universe is put on its head.
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Y U Use my Name in a story?
Now I gotta read it 
338388 Wait what? You had that title idea as well!
Now this, I like
338449
haha nahh. it's my real name, which is uncommon enough to always surprise me when I see it in a story haha
Part 2 contains parts 2 and 3.
So.... Several weeks have passed from the beginning of part one to the end of part three?
WHICH PONY IS ITTTT!?
The running upstairs and hiding under the covers part reminds me of. "Home Alone"
339285 Now that I think about it I could imagine the character screaming and running up the stairs :3
I like it, but it's a lot like My Little Dashie. The "heart exploding" was one of the things ROB had put when his character befriended Dashie. Still, great story.
You sure know how to pace a story, looking forward to see more
You just stole the best scene from how to train your dragon
but its good
341384 Yeah, its one of my favorite movies as well. My sister likes to watch it a lot and so do I. So I know a lot of the scenes from it.
dun dun duuuun
341765 I know right, this is a proper DUN DUN DUUUN moment.
Pasta usually goes with meat, rainbow should be shitless
341802 It was plain pasta and Max would have the decency to not eat meat around ponies.
341778 he could have said that vegetables were cheep and that he seeded hi backyard in places and needed hay to cover some spots.
341817 Maybe he could have, but now stuff has happened he is in a bit of trouble. A bit being a lot.
I read chapters 1-3, and I was DYING to read 4. So I read 4 and thought "UGH WHEN IS CHAPTER 5 GONNA BE OUT, IT'S SO GOOD" and then it was out. I love this story. 9/10.
Guys, there is a book that came out before the movie.
344267 I know that :3
This deserves a meme... WAIT I GOT IT!
FUCK THE POLICE
346725 eeeyup
the suspence...
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did not see that one comeing
well thats, interesting
370110 I like to make stories twist a little sometimes :3
370112 Indeed...
AND THUS! FALLOUT WAS BORN
seriously great going Max you just killed millions *clap* *clap* *clap*
374348 It's called Fiction for a reason. *clap* *clap* *clap*
touché
this is some heavy shit bro.
374594 I know, thats why I redid the ending
374517 ?
French for you made a good point, which you did.
374634 Ok :3
wo wo wo, hold up, a button that fire nukes... seems legit.
376705 That's why I looked at the ending and said, NOPE! So I made a different ending that made more scene. Now that I think about it there is a big button that fires all the nukes...right next to the big button that makes a coffee
377083 true... lets hope our government is smarter then that.... it was good knowing you.
377129 It was good knowing you too. And unfortunately the goverment would probably do something like that... Well, we are all doomed
many people have asked this before but.....WHY IS IT ALWAYS THE RUSSIANS
722277 The ending to this story is one that I wish didn't go this way. Plus I was tired and that was all I could think of at the time. If I were to redo the ending then it would be some kind of secret army and the story would go on for a much longer period of time.
So I might redo the end to this story as I would like to expand on some certain elements of it.
wow that was really good
1175007 I'm glad you enjoyed it, even though this is one of my least favorite endings to a story that I have written.
¿Cuál es el problema de ofrecer videojuegos usados? Es un tesoro si el juego funciona y todo Latam optaría por comprar uno si pudiera.