When Devil Fruits began appearing on Earth, a world war broke out for the fruits. The Devil-Devil Club's last member and founder, Jake Law, eater of the Op-Op Fruit ends up in Equestria after fleeing from the armies after the few fruits he had taken.
10404553 If it does, its one of the following that could / may happen. 1. Author gets writer's block and never continues. 2. loses interest and makes another. 3. makes character op/mary-sue/forms a harem and everyone hates them for it. 3. A single harsh comment and/or criticism discourages them and they'll delete the story. 4. they do too many cross-over stories and the story ends up all over the place.
Hmmm, the changelings talk to him, and during their talks rainbow dash tries to ram him from behind ("BUT TWILIGHT HE'S WORKING WITH THE CHANGELINGS") (shit excuse but I suck at writing) he ends up trusting the changelings over the ponies as a result? 10405665
10405672 Actually I can totally see this happening, the RD jumping to conclusion though not Jake joining the Changelings, in a time where havoc could happen at any moment, RD would totally jump the gun on something.
The moment ponies will be close to stealing fruits from him he should either destroy the fruits or start killing them without playing around, too much risk
Ponies have too much control over the great of the world
If he will join changelings then I think it's okay if, at some point Pharynx, Thorax, and Chrysalis will get the fruits or one of them or other royal changelings
10405740 Actually, in this story, the fruits can only be damaged by someone eating them, otherwise, they're invincible. And why kill when you can 'chop' someone into parts and stick them back together like a poorly done art project, you know what happened to those Marines in when Law was first shown?
10405740 2 things he can do for serious blackmail/threat material: Swap people's bodies (i.e rainbow dash in the body of rarity, rarity in the body of AJ etc) or the more drastic option: Taking their hearts
10405740 10405748 Also, The changelings already have 3 Devil Fruit users and are trying to find more, even if they have to pick fights with a creature (human) they've never seen before.
More i need to read more. At first i thought it was probably not gunna be to my liking but as i read this i grew more interested and now i need more im putting this in my tracking cant wait to read more of this story
“Stay vigilant men, we’re in one of The Devil-Devil Club’s Playgrounds! These places are littered with traps! And I’m not talking about some trap you’d put up to catch a squirrel! I’m talking bamboo sticks or 40 lbs balls covered with spears made of pipes and rebar, traps that shoot your feet off, and pits filled with crazed and rabid animals! This place is full of guerilla warfare booby traps!”
Zombie Ponies!
Here's to hoping this continues and doesn't die like a lot of new displaced/similar stories
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Changelings actually, that will be a different saga, because how would Zombies change shape?
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Oh oops guess I missed read that.
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How did that point to Zombies?
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I might of read it too fast and only saw holes
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Okay, well feel free to tell others about this story.
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If it does, its one of the following that could / may happen. 1. Author gets writer's block and never continues. 2. loses interest and makes another. 3. makes character op/mary-sue/forms a harem and everyone hates them for it. 3. A single harsh comment and/or criticism discourages them and they'll delete the story. 4. they do too many cross-over stories and the story ends up all over the place.
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That is why I'm open to ideas or suggestions.
NOOOOOO I hate and respect you for that well place cliff hanger keep up the good work I can't wait to read more super excited
I am intrigued please continue I'd like to see what this heading
This is really good, I honestly can't wait to read the next chapter
Live Long, Have Fun, and Never Make Sense
Because
What Fun Is There In Making Sense?
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Him not giving the devil fruits to the first people he thinks he can trust
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Hmm, okay, maybe in a dire situation?
Hmmm, the changelings talk to him, and during their talks rainbow dash tries to ram him from behind ("BUT TWILIGHT HE'S WORKING WITH THE CHANGELINGS") (shit excuse but I suck at writing) he ends up trusting the changelings over the ponies as a result?
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Actually I can totally see this happening, the RD jumping to conclusion though not Jake joining the Changelings, in a time where havoc could happen at any moment, RD would totally jump the gun on something.
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RD's is basically is shoot first ask questions later, consequences be damned
The moment ponies will be close to stealing fruits from him he should either destroy the fruits or start killing them without playing around, too much risk
Ponies have too much control over the great of the world
If he will join changelings then I think it's okay if, at some point Pharynx, Thorax, and Chrysalis will get the fruits or one of them or other royal changelings
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Actually, in this story, the fruits can only be damaged by someone eating them, otherwise, they're invincible. And why kill when you can 'chop' someone into parts and stick them back together like a poorly done art project, you know what happened to those Marines in when Law was first shown?
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2 things he can do for serious blackmail/threat material:
Swap people's bodies (i.e rainbow dash in the body of rarity, rarity in the body of AJ etc) or the more drastic option:
Taking their hearts
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Also, The changelings already have 3 Devil Fruit users and are trying to find more, even if they have to pick fights with a creature (human) they've never seen before.
More i need to read more. At first i thought it was probably not gunna be to my liking but as i read this i grew more interested and now i need more im putting this in my tracking cant wait to read more of this story
Even the toothbrush traps.
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(In TF2 Heavy voice.) Yes.