Well, that was entertaining.

MAWR PLEASE!

Please continue? This looks to be a VERY promising story!

Yeah, you got 11 pretty good. I've always seen Doctor Whooves as either 10 or 11 anyways.

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I loved this!!! Please continue!!!!

The Doctor

Fantastic!

I know absolutely nothing about the eleventh doctor, so I can't judge how well you got the character down. The Almighty Pink One though, you got really good. The humor was nice, and I'm interested in this story. Upvoted and tracking.

I DEMAND MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if thats ok i mean...

>>11682411168241

EVERY TIME this music plays in the show, I get super chills and I'm all like "The Doctor is about to do some crazy awesome shit YES."

To demanders of moar: Moar is coming. But updates will probably be erratic. School takes its toll....

Thanks for positive feedback everyone

>>11681261168126

And I as well. It's just way too hard to imagine an Eccleston pony.

Not a serious idea, indeed. Silly Matt Smith, running about like a proper lunatic. Can't wait for him to learn about the sun and moon, though. That'll be rather entertaining, I'd say.

wow asome

This is great! Me gusta!

This one certainly got my attention. Eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

Also, Tardis Traveler. You sir have the most unexpected avatar I've ever seen. Ghirahim riding Rainbow Dash is something I'd never thought I'd see.

>>11693901169390

Glad you're interested...but that's ma'am to you.

Yeah, I didn't think I'd ever see it either, but it made my life a thousand times better. The original art's by Evomanaphy on deviantART.

Oh I like this, really I do.

I always liked to think that the worlds we create with our imaginations exist in some sort of pocket dimension.

>>11720011172001

Thanks, I'm glad you do!

Also: my favorite man on the planet saying the one of the things I LOVE to hear him say the most like thirty times over? That is the best compliment imaginable.

>>11720651172065

It was the only compliment I could think of after reading this. I was trying to find him saying "bloody brilliant" but this worked so much better.

Oh I wish the 10th would make a cameo with the 11th, 10 was my favorite doctor.

Also it was 63 +/- 3

>>11720791172079

That would be FATASTIC. 10 is my favorite as well, I just chose to do this in 11 style since I just finished up watching his seasons in time for the next season premiere and my brain is still on Matt Smith.

63....I never was good at estimates.

>>11721731172173

I don't think the Doctor is any good at estimates either...He's either spot on(which isn't really an 'estimate') or waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay off the mark.

I think 11's style works better than 10's would for a MLP crossover. 11 just has that childish charm about him which works well in conjunction with the cartoony world of MLP (literal cartoony world in the case of this story )

This is amazing! And don't worry, you captured his personality perfectly. An expert writer couldn't have done better! This is great, my two favorite shows in one fanfic! Please continue!

>>11752101175210

You've just made my day, you have no idea. Thank you! I'll certainly be continuing

>>11757421175742

Glad to hear it!

I always thought we made worlds with our will. That, or we get psychic feedback from every other universe and certain people can tap into it, and thus make absolutely brilliant entertainment. Very nice job with the Eleventh by the way. ~ With regards, the Current Student of the Second True Magic.

Interesting You did a brilliant job with with the doctor's personality, but I feel like you missed one detail, the rants. If I remember right the 11th Doctor rants a lot more then this. (Still, fantastic though!) And, as for the story, it was quite interesting, and will definitely be getting a favorite. Keep up the good work!

>>11793641179364

Ahh...glad you mentioned that! I was trying going too long with rants 'cause I figured that might get a bit old/repetitive, but I certainly plan on having some in the future.

So I'm sorry if y'all don't like the sort of light pace to this. I'm looking for a slower build-up to the bigger action. (also shhhh, don't tell, but I was feeling really short on ideas for this chapter) Ending it the way I did was slightly painful

Rarity is much harder to write than I would have thought. Ngh. Pointers on personality portrayal if I've done something that seems OOC are always welcome!

And yes. Fear of apples is a real phobia.

>>11690081169008

I think we can all agree that there needs to be one.

*sob* NOOO! NO THE BUNNIIIEEESS!

>>11831591183159 ITS TIME FOR THE DOCTOR TO INVESTIGATE!

>>11832111183211

Yeah, you're right. He is amazing, after all, despite the sad fact that people skip his season.

>>11832461183246

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OH YES IT IS.

Edit. OMGWHUT I GOT FEATURED. Thank you, you lovely people, for making that happen.

Nooooooooooooooooo! I hope Angel isn't amongst the trio, poor Fluttershy. Don't worry the Doctor is here to help comfort you.

Honestly I think you did rather well writing Rarity, generosity and all I could see her doing the patch job free, maybe the fez...and the sudden inspiration, yeah can totally see that happening even up to asking the Doctor to model...oh Timelord I can't think of a worse thing to do to him. The Doctor could barely handle waiting for an invisible monster to show up, he'd lose all sense of sanity having to stand and model. New fashion line of Doctor swag...Equestria will never be the same.

Edit: You totally deserve the feature.

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Oh how I love a good Doctor story!

did anyone but me read it in matt smith's voice

. . . I'm going to murderize whatever did that to Fluttershy. Also, awesome Doctor characterization. Time to investigate! GERONIMOE!   ~ With regards, the Current Student of the Second True Magic.

>>11834581183458

Well, it was my goal for people to read it as him. Are you saying you did read it in his voice or didn't?

>>11833971183397

Thanks for the positive feedback! It's really very encouraging.

I could never be THAT cruel to Fluttershy, though. As much as I hate Angel.

...."Is this how time normally passes? Really slowly.....in the right order...."

>>11834961183496 Well........It looks like those bunnies might need a....(Puts on sunglasses) Doctor YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

>>11720651172065

You THIEF! You utter, utter, thief! What? The Story? No, that's his. MY PEN NAME! You've stolen my FanFiction PEN NAME!

Man, I hope you get this is a joke.

>>11836341183634

Okay, you got me. I admit I didn't foresee that one.

>>11836491183649

I was completely baffled and bemused until I read the last line.

IS ANGEL DEAD? PLEASE SAY HE'S DEAD.

The Doctor?  Will read after huge backlog of other stories.

>>11832931183293

Wait... People skip his season!?

But he was awesome! Yeah it was short, but it was awesome.

>>11837971183797

As much as I'd love to say that, I don't think I could bring myself to write Fluttershy's ensuing heartbreak. So...no solid ideas yet, but I don't think he is.

>>11838621183862

I've heard that people often skip Eccleston, yeah, just because he's supposedly "not as good" compared to Tennant and Smith and because they think they can blow him off since he's just one season. Which makes no sense, since watching his season explains *everything.*

Awesome, can't wait for a new update. I'm really liking this so far!

Also: NOOOO NOT THE BUNNIES!

Yes! Docor Whooves story! In time for the new season!

DOUBLE HAPPY!

That was great! You described the Doctor perfectly!

>>11832931183293

Eccleston's Doctor is very underrated. People say he doesn't stand out because he only had one season.

But come on. For that one season, he was pretty damn good. Coincidentally, I just watched "The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances" the other day. People don't know what they're saying, Eccleston was FANTASTIC.

>>11681261168126

Because again, most people are familiar with Tennant and Smith, and not so much with Eccleston. And not enough people watch the classic series either, which is unfortunate.

I could picture the 7th Doctor (Sylvester McCoy) working very well with this sort of crossover. Coincidentally, look who's on my desktop rotation cycle right now!

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>>11839961183996

I agree completely! I was so sad when he left. He was the perfect mix of hilarious, passionate and brilliant to me so I hate it when people call themselves crazy Whovians without watching him.

Also that two-parter. It terrified me. But in the perfect kind of way.

>>Everyone else

Thank you for the truckload of favorites and positive feedback, it makes my life

>>11840581184058

I still maintain that TEC/TDD is one of the most frightening stories of the revived series.

"ARE YOU MY MUMMY?"

It was actually my first episode of Doctor Who, too. It's what got me into watching the series regularly.

What is this place, filled with so many ponies.

The real dream world, of so many bronies.

I was your 100th flawless thumb up. I demand a cookie.

>>11841281184128

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You win ALL the cookies. And Pinkie Pie.

I can't believe I've maintained a flawless record, like...what. People aren't hating my weird writing style.

This is better than most I must say. Good work

>>11841541184154 I won a Pinkie. You've repaid me one hundred fold.

This is good. Very good. I like it. I'd give you constructive criticism, but I'm to lazy for that.

This fanfic is so,amazing. I WANT MORE!

Hmm...a Time Lord turned pony with a bow-tie, coat, and a fez. Can't say i've heard that combination before. But why give him a Fez?

>>11842701184270

Because he obtains a fez in one of his episodes of Doctor Who, saying, "It's a fez. I wear a fez now. Fezzes are cool." And hence the line "fezzes are cool" became totally famous, dunno if you've seen that episode before.

>>11842891184289 ...Now I must go through all the episodes again to find that one part I missed.

Anyway I hope 'Moar' is on the way.

>>11843331184333

'Tis from the end of Matt Smith's first season, the episode being entitled "The Big Bang."

And yes, moar is coming.

Or, if you'd rather watch the clip here:

>>11844411184441 Fez went boom...

And here is the doctor with bow ties, fez, and a stetson:

He needs a stetson at some point

>>11838831183883

Yeah. Rose, Mickey, Captain Jack, and the face of Boe (well is the first time we see it) were introduce in his season. Last time I checked they are kinda important in the 10th's. I have the urge to punch someone right now.

>>11720011172001 I've always believed in the existence of the worlds our imaginations create too. I once had an idea for a bit of fanfiction on the topic but the idea got out of control so i scrapped it.

And strangely, after I finish the 10th doctor's season, I get distracted with pony, and never finish even Tennant's first season. :(

Edit; I meant 9th

David Tennant was better

AND the correct term is

Alonsy

>>11848771184877

I went the other way. Ponies got me to watch Doctor Who. The episode was Blink. Stories like this introduced me to the Doctor.

>>11850171185017 Some here, Ponies made me watch it too! (Though, I like Doctor who more them ponies now...hehe)

>>11849681184968 I like them both the same, 11 and 10 are both brilliant!

Colour me intrigued, old chap. You've just earned yourself another Fave and Like

>>11720011172001

I always thought of it like that too as a kid. I still KINDA do..

Also hearing someone say "brilliant" so much it starts sounding like it's not a word XD

>>11845511184551

..I feel sorry for those hats..

Lol can't wait for more

Avenge the bunnies Doctor! AVEEEEEENGE THEEEEEEEEM!

I love ponies and Doctor Who and you combining them is absolut!ely BRILLIANT:

>>11870261187026

Anything the 10th Doctor says is no longer mere words, they are the pinnacle of emotional and verbal response. So "brilliant" is not a word, it is the ultimate expression of enjoyment and approval towards something.

...

*Looks at the men in white coats* "What do you mean crazy?"

...

I thought he didnt like pears.. Or was that only the 10th? I dunno I don't watch Doctor Who ^^;

>>11849681184968

Sorry, but I chose to do this in Matt Smith perspective and he says Geronimo, not Allons-y. I like David Tennant better but that doesn't mean he IS better.

>>11874051187405

I'm not entirely sure. All I know about Doctors and fruit is that 11 hates apples, 9 and 10 love bananas.

>>everyone

Omg. You people. Thank you. No downvotes and the attention I never dreamed I'd get for an idea I got while I was high off no sleep. Seriously, thank you.

>>11845511184551

I think that can be manageable. (Stupid River Song always shooting his hats off grrrr)

>>11832931183293 what season is that i just got to season three of the reboot

>>11887001188700

You mean Eccleston's season? That would be season one of the reboot.

>>11837021183702

Haha... I do that... seriously, look me up, I'm TheTARDIStraveller...

>>11849681184968

No, it's ALLONS-y!

>>11874051187405

Correct. 10 did not like pears.

Updated just hours before the new season of Doctor Who airs! Yay!

So this scene may or may not have dragged a bit, I wasn't sure how long to make it. In any case, as always comments on the correct protrayal of characters are always welcome!

Well of to Twilights place

>>12002711200271

And I have to miss the new episode...

Hope someone records it.

Anyway, another good chapter, definitely showing that Eleven is not all jokes and bow ties.  He can certainly be goofy, but can be just as serious if he wants.

Also, I did notice some errors (Rainbow asking "gimme a hand," spelling, etc.), so I would advise doing a quick proofread.

Other than that, good chapter.  Allonsy!

He just found out the sun and moon revolve around the planet didn't he?

couple typos:

Fluttershy flew a feet off the ground

He raised a roof.(I'm the carpenter just the carpenter)

but went bravely one.

Nice. Though, just a mention, TARDIS is always capitalized.

>>12004301200430

No, he didn't, but that would have been amusing.

Also, thanks. I make stupid mistakes like that a lot.

>>12004201200420

That's exactly the sort of feeling I was looking for, so I'm glad it came off well. I admit I'm an awful proofreader, it takes three or four reads for me to catch mistakes sometimes.

>>12005301200530

Is it? Oh. I've seen it different ways. I'll probably change it later.

>>12005751200575

Hmmm, well if that's not what he just discovered, I'm now expecting that to come up later.

Celestia: "One moment Twilight, I'll help you and your new friend as soon as I raise the sun."

Doctor: "...pardon?"

*Magic performance and sun raising*

Doctor:

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...This video makes me miss Donna.

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...Hmmm I wonder what he found though. This being Doctor Who, it literally could be anything.

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Also no problem, everyone makes them, you less than most I've seen.

FANCY NECK-TWISTING FOR THE WIN!

>>12005921200592

Since multiple people seem to be awaiting 11's reaction to alicorns controlling the sun and moon, I'll be sure to throw in something about that. However, I don't think I plan on giving Celestia a major role for a few reasons. (I'm not TOO sure yet, but...)

Donna. Omg Donna. She's my favorite. It took forever to decide that I liked her better than Rose, but I did.

>>12006091200609

Well that's fine, even the show doesn't give Celestia a major role. She shows up to either teach a lesson, or perform a Worf, to show how powerful the villain is. Here's hoping Celestia gets to beat a baddy on her own next season, and show the awesome power I know she has.

Yes Donna! Rose was great and all but she got a bit bland to me, plus I really didn't like the romance between them.(Just didn't work in my eyes) One reason I loved Donna was because there wasn't a romance, just a mate...as in friend!

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This is quite an amusing take on the Doctor in Equestria. Not so much the circumstances, but just your writing style that captures the wackiness of the Doctor so well. It's like we're in his head, seeing his slightly disjointed thought processes. And then the third chapter, with some rather depressing mood whiplash; honestly, poor Fluttershy. You write very well, which is the appeal of this fic. That, and bow ties, because bow ties are cool.

However, I did notice an error. In Chapter 2, you had “Welcome to Carousel Boutique, where every garment is sheik, unique, and magnifique!” I believe what you meant was “chique”, not “shiek”. “Shiek” is something else. Just as a heads-up.

Oh, also, I can’t wait to see Twilight meet the Doctor. His disjointed thought processes will clash quite amusingly with her OCD-ish tendencies.

>>12006241200624

Exactly. Plus, I have a bit of a Luna-is-best-princess-and-Celestia-is-an-effing-trollface bias.

And not only is Donna just a friend, she's bloody hilarious. (Which is why I loathed Martha. She was in love with the Doctor, pined after him, bitched about him never noticing her and wasn't very amusing. )  

>>12006591200659

It's comments such as this one that make my day a thousand times better and make me want to keep writing. Thank you! A crazy trip through the eyes of the wacky Doctor was exactly what I had intended, so I'm really glad you like it.

You know, I know why I put sheik in (long thought process so I won't explain it ), and I can't believe I didn't notice my error.

>>12006871200687

Martha? Oh you mean black Rose.(seriously she was a carbon copy of Rose

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...

Seriously first time I saw Martha I thought: "Why is Rose here and why did she dye her hair?"

Hmmm, yaknow...I think you were the only person who updated a story I'm tracking today...that makes you awesome to me.

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Great chapter! Can't wait for the all new Doctor Who tonight!

>>12007891200789

I-Im awesome?! Shucks, you people are way too good at making my day.

>>12008451200845

Well we have to do something in exchange for you entertaining us with your awesome story.

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