Sunset shimmer runs over a cat. Specifically, a brown tabby cat named Taco. And guess what? Taco is owned by Sonata Dusk, one of the sirens. After taking the sirens to the vet, Sunset finds out that the dazzlings have been living in their van, which isn't working. Feeling very guilty after almost killing their cat, Sunset invites them to live with her until they are stable enough.
She just forgot to tell the owner of the house, her older sister. Shenanigans ensure and somehow love blooms.
Chapters (4)
This story is really well written.
Is this your first story?
Not on FIMfiction, just in general.
Either way, i like it and am looking forward to the next chapter.
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Yep, you could probably tell from my writing huh?
10411589
No.... I couldn't.
I seriously felt like this story wasn't your first one ever.
This just shows you have talent.
10451955
Thanks that means a lot!!!
10451957
You're welcome.
Seriously though, you do have talent.
If you're just writing this in your free time, that just makes it MORE incredible.
Most authors i've seen in the writing of their first published stories usually get characters mixed up, can't keep the story straight, or just have terrible grammar, spelling or punctuation.
You, on the other hand, have everything done right.
The ONLY nitpick I can see with the story thus far is Sunset not even thinking about what her sister would say about letting the Dazzlings live there.
And even then that is a personal issue based on what I would have done in the same situation.
I can totally see Sunset overlooking that due to her exhaustion.
10451969
haha yeah when I was thinking of this story, that was one of the main plot points in the story. Sunset is this story that might be a little OOC but I like to think of it as an Au. But I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when it comes out, which should be in the next couple of days.
omg this is gold i really want see what will sunfire do at sunset
On your feet.
And just out of curiosity is Sunfire an adopted sister or did she follow Sunset through the mirror? I understand it's an alternate universe, but I'm curious as to how Sunset from Equestria has a sister in the human world.
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She followed Sunset through the mirror after Sunset had reunited with Celestia, maybe a year later after Friendship games. I'll go into their family lore in later chapters.
And thank you for catching that!