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MareDoVVell


“You scared me there, you saucy witch!”

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This story is a sequel to The Mis-text Mystery


A prequel-sequel to The Mis-text Mystery. While not required to enjoy this story, I suggest you start there.

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Twilight has been trying to catch Sunset's eye for months, and nothing seems to be working. Finally accepting that it's just not meant to be, she slinks off to a secluded location for some much needed crying time.

Of course she realizes some random back alley might not be the best choice for that sort of thing when she's interrupted by the last person she expected.

Cover art by Stratus35, used with permission.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 24 )
Comment posted by DashEight deleted Apr 30th, 2019

Oblivious Sunset is still oblivious I see

Finally, the Pre-Sequal is finally here!

And we're officially off as Sci-Twi has met this world's Sunset! Can't wait to see where this goes from here!

Yes! A sequel/prequel! :heart:

Also, if my “romantic” first date ended with “later tator”, I would sob in my room for hours, in the dark, and won’t listen to nobody, unless they’re bring me junk food. :facehoof:

but that's just me! Lol, love this.

at first, i thought it was a remake or inspired by this. then i read the summary xD

the story. wooo

Human Sunset smokes?!..... awesome!

Its so rare to see this pairing of Sunlight (Human Sunset and Sci Twi) but for it to be written by one of my fav writers is awesome!

But we really need to see this type of ship more. Human Sunny needs Purple Bookworm love too!

Where's chapter 3?

Also... 9597288
Don't get any ideas

9772530
It’s in the works, but not before a new chapter of This Can’t be Legal, trying to keep a rotation with my current ongoing stories in the hopes I spend less time being indecisive about them lol

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Very well then, I shall wait.

You know, reading the first one, and now the start of this one, makes me really wanna see a direct sequel, to all the parings teased in the first one. Like, Would love to see how Flash and Trixie got together. Or how Big Mac and Luna goes, same with Celestia and Cheerilee. Oh, and how Rarity and Adagio's, and Pony Sunset and Pony Twi's thing goes too. And maybe the others meeting human Sunset. :P

9782512
Hahaha I’d love to write those at some point, there’s a definite possibility if I can ever wrap up my current projects!

9782630
Sweet, if you do, I'll be on board to read them. :P

Maybe the suburbs weren't the land of adventure and freedom she had been hoping for.

I have heard many descriptions of the suburbs, but this is a new one.

In any case, looking forward to more of this. Especially if we catch up to the point where human Sunset learns about the parallel universe full of magic horses.

I was just thinking about this story, and lo-and-behold, it gets an update. I like this version of Sunset. She's fun.

Wow, it’s literally been one whole year since the new chapter, but I forgot this story existed. Decent start, I just hope you’re able to capture the magic that Caught our attention to the story in the 1st place again.

There's no reception in this alley, I don't even know what time it is!

"It's not like my phone has a clock or anything!"

And Aria ex machina. That escalated quickly. Looking forward to more, especially as human Sunset finds herself with more prospective significant others than she knows what to do with.

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Haha I'm showing my age here but there were phones that would lose the time when they lost signal.

Comment posted by twidash1993 deleted Jun 26th, 2021

I guess that explains what Sunset Shimmer would have been like in her teenage years I mean technically her human body is a teenager but she's actually in her 20s

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