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Celestia may not have told Twilight everything about her arrival in Ponyville. PaigeSaga, the previous librarian of ponyville must deal with the fact that she has been forced out of a job, and as a result no longer has a home.

This story came into existence during Everfree NW's Iron Author competition. We had 2 hours to write a story that involved a loss of greatness, lunch, and the Ponyville clock tower. This was my entry. I have since taken the time to replace filler names, and fix a few missing letters.

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Look, this was an excellent idea, but it's a mess. I think that if you had taken more time to polish, and lengthen it, it could've been really good.

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I agree, but I didn't want to change it much from it's original form as an entry to a contest that had a time limit. Its no where near the level of polish that it should or could be. I did warn that it was a contest entry with a time constraint in the extended description. I may end up writing a much longer, much better version at a later date. The truth is that even though I had a two hour time limit, due to the distance between the hotel and the con, I actually had the write the whole thing in an hour and half.

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By the way, how was Everfree NW? I live up there, but couldn't go. :fluttercry:

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It was a lot of fun. The beginning was really disorganized, but it was amazing. The events were a blast. Lines were a bit long at times but everyone was extremely friendly and legitimately wanted everyone else to have a good time, as much as they wanted to have a good time themselves. Plus, I got to hug the CMC and Tara Strong and I'm still elated from that experience a week later.

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