• Member Since 24th Aug, 2012
  • offline last seen Jun 4th, 2023

Shooterman


As you can tell by my picture, I love Halo, especially Halo crossovers with MLP. If I ever see one, instant favorite and like. Now if only somepony could make a Gears of War and MLP crossover.

Comments ( 12 )

This is my first story so give me a break.

Love the Story. Just one thing to make your story more readable, is to add a new line to a new speaker.

Oh okay thanks for the advice I'll be sure to do that in chapter two.:twilightsmile:

great so far dude, but I suggest doing some MAJOR proofreading before you post the next one, and look for errors in the previous two chapters because OCD is magic :pinkiecrazy: just kidding :pinkiehappy:

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, no...just no.:ajbemused:

I noticed that you have left me out in this chapter, as well as you have had many grammatical mistakes. I hope to be able to sign in and fix this soon, as well as a chapter of my own as we agreed! I'd love to see where this goes! :twilightsmile:

Dude I didn't know that you wanted to be in a chapter, I don't even remember agreeing to put you in a chapter.:applejackconfused:

Alright, chapter one has been updated, if I accidentaly misspelled some words, please don't hesitate to say anything.BTW, I'm still a brony.:moustache:

I have to admit, it was pretty good. But all the typos drove me insane!:pinkiecrazy:

I migh as well scan through it and double check. Like I said at the begining, Rushed. By the way, I was thinking about making a halo crossover after(or before) I finish Royal Vengeance. What do you think?

Pretty good of short reading.

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