As you can tell by my picture, I love Halo, especially Halo crossovers with MLP. If I ever see one, instant favorite and like. Now if only somepony could make a Gears of War and MLP crossover.
When tragedy befalls Ponyville and, more specifically, Twilight, how does she cope? What lengths will she go to for the sake of 'justice'? And what is Celestia hiding? Grief, loss and hatred can change anypony...
You are an ancient god who dates back to times of the beginning. However you have been lost to time due a major wound that you had gotten a long time ago, turned you into stone. A few thousand years have pasted and you're now reintroduced to the
Augustus, a German storm trooper, is sent into the Battle of St. Quentin Scar, and as him and his comrades engage and move through the enemy trenches, he is separated right before a large gas barrage from his allies. He wakes up to a whole new world.
great so far dude, but I suggest doing some MAJOR proofreading before you post the next one, and look for errors in the previous two chapters because OCD is magic just kidding
I noticed that you have left me out in this chapter, as well as you have had many grammatical mistakes. I hope to be able to sign in and fix this soon, as well as a chapter of my own as we agreed! I'd love to see where this goes!
I migh as well scan through it and double check. Like I said at the begining, Rushed. By the way, I was thinking about making a halo crossover after(or before) I finish Royal Vengeance. What do you think?
This is my first story so give me a break.
Love the Story. Just one thing to make your story more readable, is to add a new line to a new speaker.
Oh okay thanks for the advice I'll be sure to do that in chapter two.
great so far dude, but I suggest doing some MAJOR proofreading before you post the next one, and look for errors in the previous two chapters because OCD is magic just kidding
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, no...just no.
I noticed that you have left me out in this chapter, as well as you have had many grammatical mistakes. I hope to be able to sign in and fix this soon, as well as a chapter of my own as we agreed! I'd love to see where this goes!
Dude I didn't know that you wanted to be in a chapter, I don't even remember agreeing to put you in a chapter.
awkward
Alright, chapter one has been updated, if I accidentaly misspelled some words, please don't hesitate to say anything.BTW, I'm still a brony.
I have to admit, it was pretty good. But all the typos drove me insane!
I migh as well scan through it and double check. Like I said at the begining, Rushed. By the way, I was thinking about making a halo crossover after(or before) I finish Royal Vengeance. What do you think?
Pretty good of short reading.