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I'm a man who loves stories, and I love getting into them. They inspire me to be a writer.

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XD Hey, not bad work. But uh... Am I going nuts or did Twilight call her daughter "Moonshine?"

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Oops. Sorry, my bad. Didn't notice that until you told me. Note to self, double check the names and spelling.

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Welp, here it is. Sorry it took so long. I hope you like this one. You're going to laugh when you read the next chapter of the heroes facing the villains.

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you made a mistake., Genus isn't Fluttershy's son. It's Warm Breeze.

‘Mom’s right,’ said Genus ‘There’s no telling what’ll happen. They could get captured. or worse.

as for this one: ‘Mom can be pretty scary when she’s angry,’ said Genus, causing Fluttershy to blush, not wanting to talk about that subject.

But you did good nonetheless

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Aw crap, not again. Oh well, thanks for the heads up

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you're welcome. I still like the names you came up with for the guys and Emily.

But uh... there's already a Mega Man made and owned by Capcom.

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yeah, sorry about that. tried to be original as I could. Do you happen to have an idea what would be a better superhero name for Bucky instead of Mega Man

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Also, isn't Fluttershy's son named Warm Breeze instead of Gentle Breeze?

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Warm Breeze is their son. Comfy Breeze is their daughter

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Actually their daughter's name is Comfy Breeze, you know, from the Christmas special you wrote when Twilight was still pregant and that both her daughter and Sunset's son were singing for Hearth's Warming Eve special. i read that one, great story by the way.

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right. Comfy Breeze. Them I'm guessing their son is Warm Breeze?

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Yep, you are correct. I pay attention, memorize NY heart and admiration of every great story ever written. And you my friend, have an amazing imagination and talent, that even Lauren Faust herself would praise. That's a compliment by the way

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Alright, the next chapter is ready. Let me know what you think. I think you'll like this one, but as usual, please let me know what you think of it.

Looks pretty good so far. You know, I actually created my own superheroes, too.

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Really? That's actually pretty cool. You should tell me about it when you have a chance. I'm a patient person

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The superheroes I created are as follows:

Eternal Flames = Seraphoenix: Can heal himself and others using the flaming feathers from his wings and can solidify fire into any of these weapons: Double-sided sword (like thanos'), fiery chain and spiked gauntlets and leg guards
Heat Blitz = Solar Force: Can send pulsations our of the soles of his boots and gloves to help him go faster, paralyze opponents and even be able to heal wounds.
Israel Yabuki = Cosmage: Has the power to create anything just by a single thought, can even conjure up a black hole if he wants to, but has to be careful with how muc magic he uses

I recognize the Wild Mike scene, but uh... you left out Speed Walker

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Wow. Now those are some grade A superheroes

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Got another chapter for you. Also, sorry you feel frustrated and pressured and all, we've all been there. Hope you feel better soon.

This puts a smile on my face. Also, good job on bringing up the journal bit.
It's nice to know they finally got those vultures off their backs.

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Thanks. Fame and misfortune wasn't my favorite episode, and every time I watch it, I just want to scream at them and tell them off. I also imagined what it would be like if their husband's told them off. I already once wrote down of how I felt. Figured I wanted to post that when I have the chance.

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You read my mind entirely when you added that bit in there

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Coming from you that's high praise. I'll post more chapters as soon as I can.

Are you going to finish this story

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Sure will. Busy with chapter 6. Will post 5th one soon. You have my word

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Why thank you. I try my best. But thank Yabuki, he gave me permission to write these.

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I finished writing two more chapters for you. Also, you remember when I added the journal bit and the Mane 6's husbands stood up for them? Well I took the liberty into writing it, it's called "What any husband would do". Also, I tried being thorough as possible, remembered every bit of good they did and also how every character they helped in the past helped them out. Also, remember when I wrote about Silver roughing that guy up? Wait till you see what he did to him in the end. The next chapter will get interesting, as Silver will give Rarity and Sweetie Belle, along with the siblings in the same room, will give them an important lesson from his own point of view. I hope it's good enough.

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Tried my best with Rarity. I'm busy with Genus and Fluttershy now. Let's just say things between them are about to get wild.

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Here's another chapter for you, like I promised. I think you'll find this very interesting.

Great work I love it can’t wait for next chapter

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Glad you like it. Also, the next one is a work in progress. I'll give you a hint who's next; Rainbow Dash and her husband Bolt

awww, Fluttershy is so CUTE!!! And sexy, even in her bat pony form

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My thoughts exactly. Thought you might like it. I'll give you a hint on who's next. It's rainbow dash and her husband bolt. In case you wonder, I'm trying to follow them in order. Like when each of them first met their husband's.

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Also, I finished the story what any husband would do. Also, if you have chance, could you read my story a jedi's journey. I think you'll find it interesting

Great work love it can’t wait for your next chapter

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Thanks. But the credit goes to yabuki. He gave me permission to write this

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Thanks. But uh, did you think I went a bit too far when Bolt shouted "taste the thunder"?

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no, but maybe he could've said "GET READY TO FEEL THE THUNDER!!!"

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Well as I mentioned earlier. This is based after Rainbow Roadtrip. They just got home, then their husbands ended up being teleported inside it and they had to go rescue them. When they got back out, they decided to have some fun. And the rest you know.

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