Nightmare Night

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This story is a sequel to Anarchy: Pony of Chaos

Anarchy and her friends are ready for their first real Nightmare Night together, and the stars have aligned to make this one of the most memorable Nightmare Nights in Ponyville history.

Now, whether or not it turns out to be the last Nightmare Night in Ponyville history remains to be seen. But between three of Discord and Fluttershy's children cutting loose, one batpony defying millennia of his tribe's traditions, one scared Cozy Glow dealing with her past, one former Changeling Queen out for sugary treats, and a magical duel between Starswirl, Trixie Lulamoon, and Grogar himself...

Yeah. Ponyville might be in trouble.

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Nightmare Night · 25th Oct 2021 · 1,703 words
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Bookeater_otaku

Bookeater_otaku #1 · Oct 30th, 2021 · · · Nightmare Night ·

Oh oh! A Halloween story in time for the season. How nice! Can't wait to see where this is going. What could be haunting Cozy nightmare?

Ninjadeadbeard

Ninjadeadbeard #2 · Oct 30th, 2021 · 1 · · Nightmare Night ·

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I guess you'll have to read the next chapter when it comes out (soon!).

TCC56

TCC56 #3 · Nov 4th, 2021 · · · Fluttershy's Favorite Holiday... wait a minute... ·

“Hmph,” Grogar, the Father of Monsters, the Grandfather of Anarchy, the Dark Lord of Tambelon, the Harrower of Horrors, and the Nec-ram-ancer Supreme, hmph’d darkly.

Grumpy old man Grogar never stops being entertaining to me.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #4 · Nov 4th, 2021 · · · Fluttershy's Favorite Holiday... wait a minute... ·

Always good to see more of Ann and family. Looking forward to seeing what madness unfolds.

Spade_McTrowel

Spade_McTrowel #5 · Nov 4th, 2021 · 1 · · Fluttershy's Favorite Holiday... wait a minute... ·

Dat Flutters.

Totally digging the Grogar and Cozy banter, too.

Anon E Moose

Anon E Moose #6 · Nov 5th, 2021 · · · Fluttershy's Favorite Holiday... wait a minute... ·

Wild Stallion

Wild Stallion #7 · Nov 17th, 2021 · · · Fluttershy's Favorite Holiday... wait a minute... ·

Cozy didn’t get much of a choice in the matter, due to the spell Princess Twilight had cast on her. Her cocoon-blanket form popped out-of-being where she still lay asleep, and back into being a few steps behind Ann, thumping down onto the top step of the tree-house’s stairs.
“Ow,” she said, without emotion.
As Ann reached the halfway point of the stairs, Cozy flashed away again, only to drop back down onto the step Ann had just passed.
“Ow,” Cozy said, again. She sighed, and poked her bleary-eyed face out from her blankets. “Why do we do this every morning?”

Poor Cozy Glow. Always and forever smacked around by the universe. No wonder she went crazy.

Grogar blinked. His jaw shifted, slightly.
“They do not speak in hushed tones of the time I raised an army of demons upon Bard Mountain, stole the Heart of Czernobarn, and smote the pony city of Marelantis?” he asked.
Ann and Cozy shook their heads in unison.

How quickly they forget.

Cozy swallowed another helping of Prench toast. “Dude, come on. You’re old news in the evil department. Though, I’d take a storytime for anything that involves demons…”
“Aw, I’m sorry Grampa,” Ann said, softly, and began to pat her grandfather’s back sympathetically. “Maybe you can rain doom, gloom, and… uh… more doom? Later! And get a new holiday named after you!”
“Reach for the stars, geezer!” Cozy cheered, and tossed back another buttery, creamy bit of toast.

This was strangely cute. I want more. More Cute!

Frenzy and Mayhem zipped around their father instantly, and started a race for their own seats. The pink colt with blue eyes and a misty white mane (not to mention the wings and crystalline horn jutting from his noggin) flew under the table first, before materializing through it.
He took the opportunity to snatch a forkful of toast from Cozy.
“HEY!” she snarled, only to have one lock of her own mane suddenly disgorge the form of May, a long-limbed, brown filly with blue and pink butterfly wings. She popped out of Cozy’s mane, and snapped up her glass of orange juice without breaking stride.

Hmm.. annoying, criminally dishonest, and general pests for the heck of it? They're like a chip off the old block! Their father and mother must be so proud!

“No fighting babies!” Ann scowled at Cozy as she spoke her command.

They started it. You don't touch a filly's breakfast while she's eating.

“For the artistry. For Mastery. Why attempt to destroy all magic and enslave Ponykind? Why bother to conquer Equestria?”
“Pfft!” Cozy scoffed. “Easy! Because it’s there!”
Grogar nodded, approvingly. “Indeed, Vile Pink Thing. Indeed. Perhaps you and I are not so different…?”
Another helping of Prench toast appeared on Cozy’s plate, and the two former villains shared a quiet moment of understanding.

And thus a new partnership between Cozy Glow and Grogar the terrible was born. I approve.

They'll totally be the ultimate trick or treat duo. It shall be called Cozar.

They were stretched as far apart as possible now, only one foreleg and one claw connecting the two as they reached this final, climactic step.
And then, Fluttershy said, in time with the music:
“Cha cha cha!”

Surprisingly good scene. the details really pull you in. I can practically imagine the “Cha cha cha!”

Cozy grinned. “How about the one time you and I worked together? You know? With the stone thing afterward?”
A whoopie cushion dropped out of the sky and landed on her head, but Cozy knew she’d won that one.

Got them in one. This story wouldn't be the same without Cozy's ribbing.

“Hmph,” Discord hmph’d. “I was going to say, she thought it would help me make friends more easily.”
Cozy smirked, and asked, “How’s that working out for you?”

She's very perceptive isn't she?

“I’m sorry, Ann,” she said with a shrug. “I was letting Cozy Glow know what might happen if she kept insulting my family. You weren’t meant to see that.”

Ah give the kid a break. She needs something to do, or she'll go crazy. Plus when the girl's right, she's right.

“Oh, you know. Terrible things. Things that might get… red-tagged, for instance…”

Things are about to get ugly up in this house. Shouldn't you make your children leave first though? Or at least cover their ears?

Comma Typer

Comma Typer #8 · Dec 21st, 2021 · · · Fluttershy's Favorite Holiday... wait a minute... ·

It's nice to see the Anarchy crew get back together again!... sooner or later, considering there's still everyone else to see during the rest of this tale, but that aside, I'm ready to see what Nightmare Night would look like not just with Anarchy going around but in this future-verse you've got in general, all in that fittingly chaotic narrative style you've got there!

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