“Our ears can be pretty sensitive, you asshole,” Bon Bon growled in annoyance as she clenched her fist in anger. “And you’re really trying my patients with the whorse comments.”
Uh it's patience not patients Also your repeating some of you sentencing after a few paragraphs, like using the word well too much
On this was a 100% epic start I can't wait to see what happens next. I also loved the lore of who is who.
This is getting fun.
Uh it's patience not patients
Also your repeating some of you sentencing after a few paragraphs, like using the word well too much