Solaire finds himself in the land of Equestria, in which the world is as bright as the sun can be. His search for his very own sun may not have been in vain after all.
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The Nameless King is being surprisingly reasonable. I guess a change really is as good as a rest.
OOOH A DARKSOULS FIC. i havent started reading yet but am so excited
Aww. No jolly reunions yet.
WAHT!? ANOTHER DARK SOULS STORY STARRING MY BOI SOLAIRE! SIGN ME UP! (I was trying to type the word 'what', but my brain wait full-on memes and I just went with the rest.)
Spicy.
Praise the sun!
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Thanks! Ill fix it.
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Hey! Thank you a ton for giving good critique here. I hope to answer some questions here in the comment section when i'm free later today!
I'll be back sometime later, but i'll try my best to address some things and hopefully fix some things that were wrong in the chapters!
'til then! Ciao.
This has been on my mind since I started this fic.. Will there be bonfires for Solaire? If so.. Will he die and respond at one?
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So, I'm back!
As a new writer, i'm happy that you decided to give the story a good critique! I'm here to answer some things for you.
Firstly: I understand that Shining is acting much different in the story than how he usually would in the show. Especially since he's managing his own empire. There are reasons for it that I was planning to expand upon later in the next coming chapters- but you have brought up a good point in which he's acting childish. I could've written Celestia and Shining better, that I'll admit. I'm hoping that with the next coming chapters, the writing will become better!
To answer your question about Solaire's shield, it disappeared randomly in the teleportation. There wasn't exactly a reason for it disappearing, but I wanted to have Solaire fight aggressively if he were to ever encounter a battle, instead of using his shield. Though, one could say that he dropped it while being teleported.
I understand the confusion about a lot of things. That is my fault for poor storytelling, and my pacing needs to be worked on. My intention was to have certain things be out of place on purpose to get the reader to ask questions like "that does seem right." or "how does that make sense?"
I hope that my writing over-all improves throughout the next chapters, and I hope that you enjoy the story. I also hope that I wrote Solaire to your liking, as that was a big thing that I focused on.
Thanks for writing some comments, I'll be around to answer anymore questions! Thanks for giving my story a read.
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If they were to make one in the story, yes, he would be able to rise from the bonfire upon death.
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yet~
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Thanks for the positivity!
The Nameless King is a little difficult to write, as in he's extremely hostile in the game, however he has very little lore to his character to justify it. There are some things that point it out, but I am trying to improve on it.
I wanted him to be an intelligent, thoughtful person. The way he says "Don't come looking for me, or you'll get into a fight" is the idea that in Dark Souls 3, the only way to get to the Nameless King is to PURPOSEFULLY go after him. If you want to purposefully go after him, then he'll show you whats up.
I hope the next chapters are to your liking! 'til then!
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Praise The Sun!
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Sweet!!! Just had to ask
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Thanks for the encouragement, and i'm glad that I could make a decent story for you!
We'll see where the road takes us.
Oh will the Nameless King be friend or foe?
Also, the idea that the denizens of Lordran teleporting to Equestria is possible for only the Undead, but for that to happen, a bonfire would had to exist in Equestria. Other ways is one, through pulling one entity to another world, example is with Marvelous Chester possibly from the Bloodborne universe, having been pulled by Manus - though I can't tell if that was a time-related or dimensional-related. Another possibility is through paintings, but those worlds were created by those in Lordran, from what I can tell, Solaire came to Equestria through some portal which I don't think has been seen before in any of the games, so this doesn't help to say who or what is responsible to bringing denizens of Lordran to Equestria, but if Solaire makes a bonfire, then any Undead can teleport to that spot... oh, wait I forgot, they had to discover the bonfire in order to teleport... so that means they had to come to Equestria the same way like Solaire did... I wonder if the portal Solaire got sucked into is still where it is, if that's the case then anyone can wander into that, but that doesn't answer creatures like the Hollows, as they usually stick to one spot/area, and don't wander far.
Ooooooohh shit, that ain't good.....