Solaire finds himself in the land of Equestria, in which the world is as bright as the sun can be. His search for his very own sun may not have been in vain after all.
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I'm loving this story so far. In my opinion, you've gotten Solaire pretty accurate in how I imagine he would act in these situations. Always keeping his and others spirits up, and doing anything and everything he can to help others, no matter what. The argument with Shining and Celestia at first read didn't make a lot of sense to me, but thinking back on it, they're at war right now, and Shining is a frontlines leader, so I'm sure he has reasons for his outburst, if nothing else out of intense stress. I'm hoping to possibly see Solaire be able to successfully create a bonfire, because that will allow him to throw himself in front of his friends to protect them more willingly and definitely more than once, not that he wouldn't in the first place. Very interested to see what happens going forward, and I will continue to look forward to new chapters!
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Thank you for the kind words!
I'm glad that I was able to write Solaire to your liking. I try to keep him as faithful to the original design, but i'm also moving him to a slightly more casual version.
I also am glad that the idea of making a bonfire is well received! I wanted a way to keep him inside of Equestria without the risk of returning to his own world. But- we'll have to see what happens with that.
Thanks for taking the time to comment! Ciao.
I noticed some spelling errors here
I like how these chapters can feel so wholesome and touching, along with the current conflict in Equestria and its change/effect on the characters, amazing work!
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Will be fixed! Thanks for pointing it out for me!
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Perhaps~
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Glad you're liking it, thanks for the kind words!
Also- the story was on featured for a little bit! I don't know for how long since I was asleep, but the fact that it was up there for even a second makes me happy.
I'm glad that i'm improving in my writing, and that motivated me to write even more.
Maybe the Chosen Undead came to rescue Solaire (because Solaire is a sweet cinamon roll whose smile must be protected), and is acting in self defense?
Solaire is good people, he's really having a positive impact.
The Nameless King? Dragons being killed? Changelings being chased out of their homes? Rebellion getting worse?
I have clues/ideas to the dragons and changelings - somebody or a few individuals from Solaire's world is in Equestria now, as to who is an unknown - but, I wonder why the Nameless King is in Equestria, or if it is the Nameless King,,, maybe it's Ornstein.
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Nah doubt it, the Chosen Undead would soon realize that he's not in his world and if they were responsible for either the dragons or changelings, they wouldn't be outright aggressive, as what I can tell this is a good/nicer Chosen Undead unlike the various other routes the Chosen Undead would choose resulting in them killing Solaire, betraying him, doing other karmic deeds and such. My guess is that whoever is killing the dragons really hates dragons or is just killing for souls or just because they can, as for the changelings, it either is some monster or one of the more terrifying entities from Lordran.
Wouldn't mind being told what to do from time to time..".
Sub twilight vibes detected