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Natedogg2006


I've never called myself a brony, now I'm writing mlp fanfiction and enjoying it.

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Rainbow Dash has it pretty good. She's on her way to being a Wonderbolt. She's in the best shape of her life. She has great friends and even the perfect marefriend. In fact she can only think of one small problem she has in her life. Actually it's a big problem that is small... And white... And fluffy... With two big stupid ears she sometimes just wanted to grab onto and....
Anyway, will she be able to get past this one small, big problem for the sake of her relationship with Fluttershy. And will Angel ever stop trying to get between the two mares.
Another submission for the May Pairing Contest 2020. What the heck am I doing trying to do two submissions this late.
My usually comments apply, let me know what you think, good or bad. Also I'm not sure if a romance tag should apply since the romance isn't between the main characters but is the focus. Comments will really help on that one.

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Love the discourse between the two.

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That was the most fun part. I loved making Dash over react so you could tell what Angel had said.

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Yeah there is something oddly amusing about conversations where one person is saying both sets of lines for some reason. Maybe it’s the inherent absurdity of it all. There is a really odd joke in Monty Pythons later seasons where you infer that every time some one is consulting someone through a phone they get asked there shoe size for whatever reason.

Loverly to see other people writing angel bunny in rainbow dash and fluttershys life.
You did a great job here and RD and Angels conversations were great the way you wrote them. Rainbow Dash’s reactions in particular were great at showing both what he said and displaying how she was feeling.
That’s also a cool idea that Dash could eventually understand Angel bunny. I really like it and am tempted to use in a future story...

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Feel free. That moment she realizes it's happening is basically what the whole store is built off of. I think I originally planned on using it in a flutterdash at some point, I just never managed to work it in. And yeah, it's funny that he's so often ignored (even by me) or blatantly written out of stories. Thanks for reading.

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Thanks for the fav too:twilightsmile:

Thanks for the first hundred views everyone

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