Tearing walls down once just isn’t enough, and more often than not, help is needed - no matter how strong you are.
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Future Regret
Former Occupations: Boxcar, Jug of Wine, and a Straight Razor (if you get too close).
Future Regret
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Nice idea for a story, and a great pair to write it with
I think the prose might be just a little bit much? Maybe the double 'frigid' in the first paragraph? I'd also be interested to hear what it is about Bulk that he considers ugly in himself. I am glad they have found this happiness together though :pinkiehappy;
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Don’t know how i missed this comment, I do usually reply to every thought out one that warrants a thanks: so thank you, especially for reading my least popular story. You’re definitely right about the prose, and it could be better 100%. This was kinda a challenge to myself to see if I could just do prose (most of my stories are mostly dialogue). I just assumed for that Bulk has some deep discontent with his himself, hence his obsessive sculpture of his body, and that Derpy would be the obvious character to relate to that. I should have been more transparent though. That’s something I for sure would do in dialogue if I wanted to cut down on the prose or make the story longer buuut I don’t.
Whew anyway really appreciate the feedback and the excuse to ramble on a bit.