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Future Regret
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I AM SEXY AND I KNOW IT BUT THIS STORY IS NOT SEXY
Great first chapter!
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Thanks for reading it!
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So you like, or no?
You'd think that Applejack knows how to handle grief by now... Or that's what Rainbow Dash thought.
Great story. Just thought that the final confrontation could have been a little longer. Applejack's attitude shift takes up a single paragraph.
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Thanks amigo.
I definitely agree with you whole heartedly on your critique. I wrestled with that a bit, but truth be told after half a decade I was running out of steam on this idea lol. But for sure something I’ll work on if I try to do a longer fic again. Thanks for the feedback!
This story really goes deep. Applejack's thoughts, pain, and suffering are very realistic. Keep up the good work. 👍
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Thanks for reading. The story definitely tries to be introspective-honestly that was the hardest part about it. Warms my heart when this old fic gets love. In a few more stories maybe I’ll try something longer than a dumb one shot. Stamina is hard though.
ok, I have no idea what is going on...
...except that AJ huffs gas.
Braaaaaaaaaaaap...
Oh you probably meant gasoline
OK, so, I still don't understand what happened with the rest of the town and why it was abandoned, and why everything seems dead.
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Good question lol.
In the description of the story it says something about the towns veins - that’s referring to the depletion of aquifers. I didn’t go into more detail because ooo mystery and also because I couldn’t even tell you now the science behind the dust bowl and desertification (and I definitely couldn’t have told you when I was 16 when I started writing this fic. But yeah it’s lack luster fic. But still, I always get a kick out of when people read it - so thank you. I just wonder how tf people stumble on it in the current age.