Communication is key in any relationship; But what if it’s one that hasn’t even started? Applejack and Rarity have been friends since childhood. As they grew, so did their feelings. Will they be able to overcome their misunderstandings, or is this the end of their friendship altogether?
My First story that I have been working on for a long time. Thought I should publish. Enjoy!
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I'd say that this is off to a good start. Will be watching it.
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Thank you for the comment. I do hope you enjoy it!
So Flutters and Dash. A classic, and adorable, pairing.
Looking forward to the next.
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Thank you for the comment!
Nice, please more
Oh AJ. Coming to grips with your feelings isn't easy, is it?
Slow realization is still realization.
only four chapters so far and im already in too deep this is the best thing thank u for this
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aww thanks. That made me happy to hear! I hope you continue to enjoy it :)
Communication: the solution and cause of so many problems in the world.
So close. And yet, so far.
Argh! For the love of Gaia you two, talk to each other!
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Haha, I love the frustration in this comment. Ideally, this was what I was aiming for when writing this; I was looking to show something that should be so easy for them, yet they always just barely miss each other. I appreciate your comments and I am glad you are enjoying it!
I like this! I look forward to continuing
Well, maybe they'll actually talk things out? Who knows.
Awww, so cute!
Are you seriously going to have some other fool putting the moves on Rarity and AJ walking up and seeing it????
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🤷🏾♀️ Who knows. I asked myself the same question while I was writing this. ;)
*continuosly banging head on table, wondering when the next chapter comes out...*
Ay yo, can a brother get another?
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Yes. yes you can. 😁
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lol its out know!! I hope your head is okay🥺
Wait a sec... Timber?
Hooray! Beautiful conclusion for our marshmallow and apple girls.
So, is there going to be an epilogue or something? 'Cause the story's still marked as incomplete.
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Oh hoh hoh, Very nice!
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Good eye! :)
Awww. Gotta admit though, the irony of Pinkie grousing about someone hugging to tight is delicious.
Yay! It finish! Me done reads fic.
What a ride... I went from shaking my head incredulously, to wanting to yell at those two sweet idiots, to wanting to shake some sense into them, to wanting to shake the author, to wanting to shake the author's hand. And all this whilst smiling like a daft damn idiot. I don't think I've ever felt this invested in a story on this site! Heck, after all that the romance really feels deserved; those two definitely suffered enough for it. And what a sneaky way to make it a DOUBLE shipfic! I heartily approve
I can say with some confidence that this is The Best fic I've read on this site thus far. (Though admittedly I've only been 'round here for only a short while, but still!)
Okay, gonna stop before I embarrass myself any further with this whole gushing fanboy thing.
Agsgdbanahdvdva! Talk to her!
Thanks for the fic!
Oh Flutters, you've got it so bad.
So do Aj and Rarity for that matter.
Seriously you two? Oh come on!
Of all the thick skulled, pig headed... just damn it!
The drama is real.
I swear to Celestia I am so done with them
This is my maybe third or so read through of this story and I absolutely love every moment!! You have such a writerly cadence that is beautiful and thoughtful of each individual character. Thank you so much for this story ❤️
2 COMMENTS?!? THIS IS STARTING VERY GOOD IM VERY HAPPY
oh nvm just 2 on the first chapter, my bad :3, only read first chapter but im loving very much, very excited :3
A great story of 2 lovers.
It gives me "that feeling", you know the one.
I gave a happy sigh as well as I settled into this moment, adding this story to my memory, planning to hold on to it for a long time :)
I was going to ask how AJ must have been holding the controller to manage that, but then I remembered some of the nightmare 3rd party stuff I have used/seen over the many generations of consoles.
Also I’m amazed that Dash could convince Shy to go with that when the others are only a few rooms away.
Really have to wonder how long its going to take for someone to slap sense into one or both of them.
Nice. Was hoping for slightly more violence against Preston overall, but a very good read.
oooooooo I love it so far!!!
omg side pairing of FlutterDash?????? YESSSSSSSSSSS this story just keeps getting better
I'm mcloving it
Rarity what are you about to do
So far, so good! STILL MCLOVING ITT
CARAMEL APPLE GIRLS FOR THE WINNNN
Yessssss this was such a good and satisfying read!! Thank you for making it :)