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No problem.
Enjoying so far. Just be aware that the formatting broke half way through the letter and it dropped the italics. At least it’s a quick fix.
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ACK! THANKS! I'll fix that right away! the next chapter is coming out tonight ^^
Reading the letter gave off the serial stalker vibe becuause of how connected they are and how they have been tracking Gilda's birthday.
I can only imagine the process gabby had to go through to get the heat-suppressant potion so she can continue doing her job as a mail bird.
The mystery deepens! Good job so far.
Giving it a 50% chance that Gabby is the admirer.
Oh how wonderful it was to find your story. I could not stop reading, to lead into Gilda's letter kept me intrigued. Gilda, a griffon of hardships and distrust, did her best to sound out her birb concerns. What if this was a trick? Why her of all griffons? Could she even believe herself worthy of love?
My heart strained its beats in sadness for her. Gilda doubted her situation with a comical trail of honest thoughts, surely a relatable scenario for viewers who second guessed their unexpected gifts and fortunes. I adored the introduction of the Festival of Life. How you describe the lore of your world is incredible. My weary mind alleviated with each sentence, a stern attitude from Gilda regarding her heat amidst a spectacle of mating and courtships, each stage with its own color coding! I squeed at the thought of Gilda wearing a fashionable red to ward off potential suitors. Surely Gilda learns quickly how to uplift her situation. To know of her grandfather's setup to a suitor was shocking, a slash across the eye which spawned a whirlpool of warnings to griffons far and wide, be cautious of this birb, for she is trouble. Could not be further from the truth, knowing the sweetheart struggled with 'season'.
How you described the dreaded itch was most entertaining. I not only figured there were phsyical needs for dear Gilda, but also emotional ones, held in suspense by the absence of a second letter. To long for a fateful meeting in an alleyway, finding her admirer, oh how I immersed in the dream. Even with the commotion below, Gilda yearned for something she could rightfully claim was hers to cherish. A lonely soul enjoying the sensations of her body was like Gilda making peace with herself, that she was worthy of love too with proof in every breath and intensifying desire to share in sincere feathery passion. One that ignited a similar triumph to the sky beyond Rainbow Dash's reach, above the clouds, where things no longer seemed so bad.
In comes Gabby, yet again the gleeful friend unafraid of Gilda's impressive, frustrated reflexes. It seemed kind hearted that even Gabby cherished a singles night, choosing to ease her own heat as Gilda had attempted. The reveal of Zacora's passion was such a highlight. You captured the intimidation and friendly awkwardness of the scene perfectly. The ruffled chest fluff, the simile of a vice grip in griffon loins, and the adorable stare of Gabby caught with yet another reminder of Ponyville for Gilda. Her tempered fury shook me up, a good chuckle at her interrogation tactics as both birb friends confessed their positions on a night of instinct. The smelling of Gabby's feathery, ruffled neck was the humorous highlight of the chapter, with Gilda eager to latch onto a single scent of relief. Gabby's wide eyed self reacting with peak caution was so adorable, especially once peeking from her door at Gilda's curiosity, reminding me of a pink pony's suspicious stare of doom. Their relationship continues to impress me <3
I loved the reveal of the second letter, how Gilda's heart strengthened at the pain of the author's voice. A romantic lover in the making, their yearning for Gilda's happiness and expert knowledge of her woes led to the loudest 'Aww' I could muster. You wrote their lines with elegance and I fell for the spell as well. Gilda's realization and subsequent silencing of Gabby's heightened excitement had me cheering, awake fully at last from a long week of struggles to welcome the two friends' new chapter in life. I smiled greatly at Gabby's urgent reminder for a present idea, then with Gilda's feigned authoritative demands of food: surely the greatest cure to a deep itch of the soul. Fantastic focused story, it's a treat to discover and a mighty page scroller. These birbs' friendship is one to cherish for a long time, as many of your readers can agree. Look forward to the next chapter <3
- Alco