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I absolutely love how you apply unicorn magic to the field of psychology. I'm no psychologist but to me it makes a lot of sense. It's just a great way to combine the fantasy world of mlp with the field of psychology as I expect most people not working in the field see it (and maybe those who do as well, I'd love to hear what they think).
I'm really looking forward to whatever number of sessions we get to see.
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Yay!
It be me again, the Winter Birb, here to point out things both large and small ^v^!
v Capitalization goes here v
"G-gilda...m-my Rose..."
Very good! yes!
That sound makes me want to sing...
...I know you aren't crazy
The whoooooole portion between the Italics there kinda... fell apart, in the letter. Not sure if that was intentional or not, but from looking at the rest I'd wager it's an oversight.
I miss being sick off it!
Double-tapped the F there.
...shrinks in town(don't even...
Missed a space here, after the word "town" and before that first bracket.
The word's she'd written...
The apostrophe doesn't belong there, it's not a conjunction like "word is" and it's not something belonging to the words like "the word's meaning" as an example.
that washed up her spin to
I believe you meant to say spine, not spin.
Apparently it had a nape but she
Likewise here, I think you meant name.
...are they possibly related? Sisters maybe?
One more small bit here where the italics broke.
That' not really surprising
Missed the S in that's.
And thus concludes the typos and other small errors, now back to our regularly scheduled squawking.
I think my own reactions varied about as much as Gabby's at the beginning, going from one extreme to the other of "daww's", "grr's" and ";v; -'s." Like, there's the cute cuddling from them!... and the tear-jerking of Gabby feeling so doubtful, so scared.. I'm glad to see that she's slowly getting better though, step by trembling step.
Keep up the good work, and you'd better be ready to mop up the tears you're bringing ya bastard ;v;
As an aside, if you have a Discord or something and are still good with me proofreading everything, or even just a bit of advice or anything here and there, DM's here are open to send that across!
Heads up, broken italics in a bunch of the opening paragraphs.
Apparently it had a name
This next part may be a bit presumptuous of me, but I added a bit to one part. Not sure if the setup of Ivy having crossed paths with Gilda was going to be paid off later, so ended up doing it myself. Please, feel free to integrate it with the rest of the story if you wish.
Outside of that, I am continuing to enjoy the story so far, and look forward to the next chapter as usual.
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thank you. I went over that chapter with a fine toothed comb, and found SEVERAL errors I was able to fix. as well as areas I could add to or remove. I hope you like the rest! feel free to tell me what ya liked!
Hey Backlash, think ya mighta missed my post with the corrections on this chapter '^v^
Just making sure you don't miss it all, sorry if this sounds pushy.
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Ack! I totally did!!!!!
So very sorry floof!
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No worries, you're a busy dood ^v^
Therapy does suck but honestly the. Step to recovery has already been made and that is admitting there is a problem. Not to mention ivy made the solid point that in order to go further some terrible stuff has to be brought back up.
There is something troubling though, i cant help but feel that their relationship is either going to be the strongest and most balanced anyone has ever seen or its going to be one of those pairings that will require a ton of maintenance. Eitherway, getting this far shows deterimation and dedication.
Just uhhh...Hope you got business insurance doc XD
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she has spare pillows, and bunny rabbits. claws tend to rend them quite easily after all ^^
I have finally caught up with this riveting story and I'd like to contribute some corrections.
That's the noun - you need the verb: breathe.
whereas is one word
In this case, any more is two words. The single word has a different meaning.
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Thank youuu!! I shall make those corrections shortly!
Have you been enjoying it so far? Any favorite parts?
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I especially enjoyed the parts where Gilda had discovered Gabby's secret and they were dancing around each other keeping up the pretense. Zecora deserved the punch in the snout for blowing that to pieces.
It's now nearly 3am, and I binged this story.
Anyway, I really like it, and can't wait for the next chapter :D
Recommended Listening for the therapy part