Cloud Four-and-One-Fifth

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Misty Spell

Misty Spell #1 · Apr 25th, 2020 · 1 · 1 ·

What's your obsession with 'WITH SEXY RESULTS' anyway?

darf

darf #2 · Apr 25th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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someone put it in the descriptions of their podcast way back in the day and we thought it was hilarious, so now we continue it as a meme/tradition

Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #3 · Apr 25th, 2020 · 1 · 3 ·

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It might have been funny at one time. Now it just makes people look lazy when they reuse the same thing over and over again.

Makes them look like they can't come up with something better, or to just not include that much in the short description at all.

darf

darf #4 · Apr 25th, 2020 · · ·

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well, everypony pretty much seems to hate it, so even though it makes us sad, we will try not using it in our next few descriptions and see if there is any difference. we can always put it in the long description, maybe.

Super Trampoline

Super Trampoline #5 · Apr 25th, 2020 · 3 · ·

Relevant:

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I mean, maybe don’t use it all the time, but for a story that clearly isn’t meant to be taken too seriously, I think it’s funny.

Rainbow Kirby

Rainbow Kirby #6 · Apr 25th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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Really, if the only thing people have to complain about is a silly line you add to your descriptions, then you're doing pretty good. Ignore the complainers and you do you.

It's kinda sad that these people are trying to bully you into stopping something you like to do. If you look at the comments in this and the other story 10195233 where people (2 of which are the same person) complain about it, they have multiple red thumbs. Clearly, they are just the vocal minority.

Waiting for Godot

Waiting for Godot #7 · Apr 26th, 2020 · 2 · ·

...good to have you back. This is champagne quality.

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #8 · May 27th, 2020 · · ·

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------ Review ------

Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-It is fun watching them be high and do high things.
-Rainbow doesn't get to get off?
-Kind of feels like it's more about getting high than about getting off.
-Dash shuddered , then finished -- extra space.
-Very fast buildup.
-When Celestia came, Dash swore she saw the sun, just for a moment -- that's really cute.

------ Scores ------

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 50/100
Allure: 30/100
Enticement: 20/100
Immersion: 80/100
Prose Quality: 89/100
Total Score: 282/500
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