My stories are almost as bland as my personality and that's not okay.
After an almost death experience, Rarity decides to take on a minimalist lifestyle, and gives her prize possession to Sunset as her first step; all in all not a good situation if we're being honest.
On the other hand, Twilight tries - keyword tries - to help Applejack harvest some apples. Also not an ideal situation.
Cover art by @Akuama, if anyone can find their account, please let me know as their deviant art account seems to be down (I have sourced where it has been posted).
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Every sentence of that opening hits harder than a bus. Brilliant, as is the rest of the fic
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Follow up the entire fic was just a freak accident of buses crashing into me. Hilarious riot mate
Holy crap, this was brilliant.
The pace felt a little fast, but I think that was mostly do to a misplace of punctuation. At times I couldn't tell if this story was edited or not, but even if it wasn't it's still amazing. I'd suggest getting an editor to help with punctuation and stuff like that.
Fyi, it's spelled acres.
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Thanks for your input, honestly, I should look into it, because for me editing is a hit or miss. As in sometimes I'm able to pick up my smallest of mistakes, and sometimes I end up doing a quick look over because I'm completely done with this story. As you can tell, this time is the latter.
Anyways TL/DR: Thanks again for your comment and I will totally look into the whole editor thing 😄.
I think that's more of a Rain Man moment.