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Darkness Moon


Hey Guys! I'm Darkness Moon, but my friends call me Illiow (I know, weird name XD) What I love is the SunDagio! It is my favorite couple of all! I love horror, and the adventures, and romance

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Firewatch is known for taking players on a journey and kicking them in the gut when done. I decided to take Firewatch apart and make sense of its controversial ending because I think Firewatch has one of the most powerful endings in modern games. It's almost too real to handle.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 18 )

Awesome chapter!! I really love it πŸ’•πŸ’•

Is this part of a series? I feel like there's lot of background information missing but I'll keep reading cause it made me curious.

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is the first chapter, the story start in the next one

10189767
Yeah it's a series. Go read her other stories about outlast and the forest ^^

Can’t wait for the next chapter

This seems like a written version of the game so far. Maybe put more descriptions or something? Will your story branch off or just follow the game to the exact dialogue?

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Almost. It is not exact to the game because the protagonist is Sunset and not Henry, who is the original main character. I just want to respect the original dialogue and events, almost everything. Instead of discovering Henry's transformer, the main character; I will focus on Sunset, revealing things of equestria. But yes, it is convenient to add a better synopsis, as long as I have time to update.

I loved firewatch, great story.

Finally an update \^_^/ Even though I know the story of Firewatch form top to bottom, what is making this fic interesting is the interaction between Sunset and the dazzlings :)

Also, I’m going to sound like a sales person, but I will recommend you to pass the fic through grammarly, you only need to make a profile (you don’t even have to give any information besides your email) and the free tolls will help to detecting and dealing with most of the issues, that being said I recommend you to get an editor here:

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors

Thank you, I hope to finish the story soon and continue other projects.😊
And about that, I already have an editor. I continued the conversation while I watched the game, with subtitles, I guess it didn't look as good as I thought. πŸ˜…

I should probably point out that the embedded pictures are NOT showing

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Yeah, like this one: [img]file:///C:/Users/user/AppData/Local/Temp/msohtmlclip1/01/clip_image008.jpg[/img]

Outside of some rough grammar it went well.

Firewatch was such a good fucking game

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