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TheBronyKnight
I write about the things that people may find unimportant, but to me they are the right questions that need attempted answers. paypal.me/funkMonster
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Sex is coming in a few days. I'm under the weather and wanted to release something so that's why it's cut in half. Plus this is something quick before i go to work on my next short horror.
Oh.......my.........Celestia....... I hate how lucky Discord is in this story.
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Trust me my friend.. We all do lol
*immediately googles the tulip* intresting information I must save it. For science if course.
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The best kind of science ;)
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lol! It is, to bad there a quarantine interrupting my scientific research that definitely 100% for science.
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Well I am always open to sharing my "notes" with a fellow scientist. As long as you have a good "scientific method" for some accurate results.
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Hahaha ur funny! Creative word play there! Of course I have a method every good scientist does.
Am I the only one that is now wanting to see Discord in a strip club now? With and/or without shenanigans ensuing
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I would like to see it too, but Fluttershy is possessive so that won't happen ;)
Always nice to have more Fluttercord, would've love to see her go Fluttergoth on him!
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Flutterslut was fun to write, but the next Fluttercord I would make might be related to this image..
pbs.twimg.com/media/D5nGydGW4AMEPwT?format=jpg&name=large
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That could be fun, good luck with your next fic! Haven't gotten around to that episode of EQ yet, so behind there!
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
And make sure to allow notifications from the contest group and/or follow Dirty Little Secret to get the full results and the awards show post on June 9th!
You can also check the current ranking, thanks to garatheauthor's unofficial ranking of the scores that have been publicized so far.
------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-I like 'Dissy' as a nickname.
-Typo in description.
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You are going to a strip club Dissy.-- missing not, missing comma.-
Fluttershy said as she taps-- tense slipping.-
and that’s final” Fluttershy said-- missing punctuation.-
she jiggles his breasts a bit-- well, this story just got a lot kinkier.-Why would Discord sending her a message on every possible social media site make it any better?
-Wait, did she just lock him in the basement? A) that's extremely cruel and abusive. B) He's Discord -- he could just snap his fingers and get out.
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When they started dating 4 years ago-while she was in high school and he was a graduate going to college,-- wut?-Bizarre choice of details to mention sometimes.
-Grammar was pretty gnarly overall.
-It's a nice, sexy solution to their relationship problem ... but it doesn't really solve their problem, does it? After everything they just did together, Discord might still want to go out with the guys.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 60/100
Allure: 45/100
Enticement: 30/100
Immersion: 25/100
Prose Quality: 15/100
Total Score: 175/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
Goosebumps all over me and u don't know how red my face is. It's redder than fluttershy's lingerie set (not really and I just took a bath)
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You don't know how much goosebumps I have and how red my face is.
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Sorry if I gave you irreversible cherry face syndrome. It's a side effect to my Fluttercord fics.
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It's k it's really normal
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Any other ships I should try writing?
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Anything u want it don't want u to be uncomfortable writing something ur uncomfortable with ^^