I enjoy reading and writing cute ponies. If my works brighten up your day, even better.
Set the day after May the Best Pet Win!
Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash enjoy some time out together with their pets. What starts off as a short pet playdate turns a fun-filled day together.
The story contains plenty of sweetness and cute moments.
Makes references to my Fluttershy & Rainbow Dash fillies fic, Crashing Angels but works well as its own cute short story too.
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Why isn't this rated E?
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Alright. Fixed.
Simply because I dont normally rate my stories E
Let's get the very easy fixes out of the way first before getting to the meat of the story. There was one time that Pinkie's name didn't have an e at the end. Simple fix. What was weird was that there was a weird sentence in the middle of the story.
Seems like there was going to be more of that sentence, but it abruptly ended and it didn't continue in the next sentence. Tank did what? No clue.
Otherwise, I loved the story. I haven't listened to that song in a very long while and it brought up a lot of old memories of the show during that season. I don't usually see a lot of Tank and Angel scenes, though I don't usually search for them. Really have to say you wrote them rather well since I could see the show almost use some of those kinds of gags for Angel. Nice to see some connections between this and CA- though with that talk of Soarin' now I'm worried what that might mean for that story. I never connected that Zephyr would be right at home in the RD fan club, but I could weirdly see it with his odd attachment to her. Whenever Pinkie gets a scene I do really enjoy it. This really had that simple, or pretty simple season 2 vibe with just how everything felt. Usually there's something in stories that doesn't feel like a early episode, besides the overall content. Feel, tone, something. This just felt like right after MtBPW so it felt right at home, imo.
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Fixes have been dealt with, thank you for pointing them out.
Serves me right for publishing as quickly as I did.
I'm glad the story felt at home in its setting as intended and that it gives some good hints for Crashing Angels and where things may go.
A nice one shot with funniness and cuteness. Found it particularly funny when dash slapped Fluttershy's mark with her wing.
It was relaxing to read something reminding of the simpler times and early seasons.
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And thank you for the comment.
Makes me consider writing the next one I have in mind a bit sooner..