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Hawker Hurricane


Yorkshireman and tea drinker.

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I awoke in a strange land with nothing to my name and nothing of home. After watching a stunt team do a performance, I found a new challenge. One that would push me beyond my limits.

I would be one of them.

I would be a Wonderbolt.

No matter what it took.

(First person, from my ponysona's perspective. Partially self-insert.)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 16 )

Stand back, there's a hurricane coming through.

Comment posted by JakJak75 deleted Mar 31st, 2020

Shows promise. I'll wait till it gets a little longer, but i'm excited!

Can’t wait for more, I have a hope he gets a break soon

Is it me or these ponies don’t just use a memory spell? Like Luna could easily go to his mind and see for herself :applejackunsure:

I think he needs to do more then just right history... He should advance other countries just to mess with Equestria

Awesome! It's 3 AM now but Who cares? Well done!

Not even Mickey Goldmill would have called Rocky a bum as quickly as Soarin did you. RIP Burgees Meredith.

I think that this chapter's main point is fear. Ponies fear what is strange or different to them, as do all living creatures. The problem I have with ponykind in the series is that instead of coming to know others out of something as simple as curiosity, they have a knack of portraying themselves as a bigotted and racist species. Instead of conquering their fears and preconceptions, they cower and rot in them. Do not take what I say as a kind of absolute truth, for I consider myself to be an ignorant fool. This is what I understood by watching some episodes of My Little Pony: Frendship is Magic.

*MEANWHILE*

Like, at the same time! :derpytongue2:

"Oooh, I'm so scared of what a cake addict will do."

Quickly, one in particular came up to me. A small white rabbit.

I expected him to show up. :ajbemused:

Instead of CNN could be PNN :ajsmug:

Anyways, makes me wonder if SpitFire knows that he is human. Hopefully he will be able to prove he is

Looking forward to seeing you update your stories, Hawker! :)

uis

Should't this story have human tag?

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